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alexwong2164

Nov. 24, 2020

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Rucksack with cooling fan attached

What an amazing product in a hot summer!

Especially for me.

I wear rucksack every day.

I need to walk 20 minutes to my office.

The back of my rucksack is almost fully wet!

I will put it under the sun, spray water on the surface try remove the smell.

But I still feel is dirty!

I really want to buy this rucksack now.

I can even feel the comfortable!

Corrections

Rucksack with an attached cooling fan attached

What an amazing product infor a hot summer, especially for me!

Especially for me.

Especially for me is not a complete sentence. I have combined the last two together.

I wear a rucksack every day.

Rucksack is a British term. In American English, you'd use "backpack"

I need to walkt takes 20 minutes to walk to my office.

TBy the time I get there, the back of my rucksack is almost fulcompletely wet!

I willould put it under the sun, spray water on the surface tryo remove the smell.

But I still feel is dirty!

Now I really want to buy this new rucksack now.

I can evenalready feel the comfortable!

Rucksack wWith ca Cooling fFan aAttached

What an amazing product it is in a hot summer!

Especially for me.

This isn't a full sentence. Consider merging it to either the sentence before or after.

I wear a rucksack every day.

I need to walk for 20 minutes to get to my office.

TAfter those 20 minutes, the back of my rucksack isends up almost fully wet!

I will putould leave it under the sun, as well as spray water on the surface try and remove the smell.

But I would still feel is dirty!

I really want to buy this rucksack now.

I can even feel the comfortable already!

I can even feel the comfortable!


I can even feel the comfortable already!

I can evenalready feel the comfortable!

Rucksack with cooling fan attached


Rucksack wWith ca Cooling fFan aAttached

Rucksack with an attached cooling fan attached

What an amazing product in a hot summer!


What an amazing product it is in a hot summer!

What an amazing product infor a hot summer, especially for me!

Especially for me.


Especially for me.

This isn't a full sentence. Consider merging it to either the sentence before or after.

Especially for me.

Especially for me is not a complete sentence. I have combined the last two together.

I wear rucksack every day.


I wear a rucksack every day.

I wear a rucksack every day.

Rucksack is a British term. In American English, you'd use "backpack"

I need to walk 20 minutes to my office.


I need to walk for 20 minutes to get to my office.

I need to walkt takes 20 minutes to walk to my office.

The back of my rucksack is almost fully wet!


TAfter those 20 minutes, the back of my rucksack isends up almost fully wet!

TBy the time I get there, the back of my rucksack is almost fulcompletely wet!

I will put it under the sun, spray water on the surface try remove the smell.


I will putould leave it under the sun, as well as spray water on the surface try and remove the smell.

I willould put it under the sun, spray water on the surface tryo remove the smell.

But I still feel is dirty!


But I would still feel is dirty!

But I still feel is dirty!

I really want to buy this rucksack now.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Now I really want to buy this new rucksack now.

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