Nov. 24, 2020
What an amazing product in a hot summer!
Especially for me.
I wear rucksack every day.
I need to walk 20 minutes to my office.
The back of my rucksack is almost fully wet!
I will put it under the sun, spray water on the surface try remove the smell.
But I still feel is dirty!
I really want to buy this rucksack now.
I can even feel the comfortable!
Rucksack with an attached cooling fan attached
What an amazing product infor a hot summer, especially for me!
Especially for me.
Especially for me is not a complete sentence. I have combined the last two together.
I wear a rucksack every day.
Rucksack is a British term. In American English, you'd use "backpack"
I need to walkt takes 20 minutes to walk to my office.
TBy the time I get there, the back of my rucksack is almost fulcompletely wet!
I willould put it under the sun, spray water on the surface tryo remove the smell.
But I still feel is dirty!
Now I really want to buy this new rucksack now.
I can evenalready feel the comfortable!
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What an amazing product it is in a hot summer!
Especially for me.
This isn't a full sentence. Consider merging it to either the sentence before or after.
I wear a rucksack every day.
I need to walk for 20 minutes to get to my office.
TAfter those 20 minutes, the back of my rucksack isends up almost fully wet!
I will putould leave it under the sun, as well as spray water on the surface try and remove the smell.
But I would still feel is dirty!
I really want to buy this rucksack now.
I can even feel the comfortable already!
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I can even feel the comfortable! I can even feel the comfort I can |
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What an amazing product in a hot summer! What an amazing product it is in a hot summer! What an amazing product |
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Especially for me. Especially for me. This isn't a full sentence. Consider merging it to either the sentence before or after.
Especially for me is not a complete sentence. I have combined the last two together. |
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I wear rucksack every day. I wear a rucksack every day. I wear a rucksack every day. Rucksack is a British term. In American English, you'd use "backpack" |
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I need to walk 20 minutes to my office. I need to walk for 20 minutes to get to my office. I |
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The back of my rucksack is almost fully wet!
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I will put it under the sun, spray water on the surface try remove the smell. I w I w |
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But I still feel is dirty! But I would still feel But I still feel |
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I really want to buy this rucksack now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Now I really want to buy this new rucksack |
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