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Tongji Weir

Yesterday I uploaded another video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/GanBmJ5ptR4

It has some views near a weir built 1500 years ago. I enjoyed the views very much. They were more beautiful in my eyes than in the video. I hope one day you guys can see them by yourself.

There's also a small temple near the weir on the shore. It is old and somewhat worn, but it still maintains a sense of dignity. Because in the temple, the person who built this weir is enshrined, and the people who repaired it throughout history are introduced and commemorated.

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Tongji Weir

Yesterday I uploaded another video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/GanBmJ5ptR4 It has some views near a weir built 1500 years ago.

I enjoyed the views very much.

They were more beautiful in my eyes than in the video.

There's also a small temple near the weir on the shore.

It is old and somewhat worn, but it still maintains a sense of dignity.

Because in the temple, the person who built this weir is enshrined, and the people who repaired it throughout history are introduced and commemorated.

There's also a small temple near the weir on the shore.

It is old and somewhat worn, but it still maintains a sense of dignity.

There's also a small temple near the weir on the shore.

It is old and somewhat worn, but it still maintains a sense of dignity.

Tongji Weir

They were more beautiful in my eyes than in the video.

There's also a small temple near the weir on the shore.

Tongji Weir


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Yesterday I uploaded another video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/GanBmJ5ptR4 It has some views near a weir built 1500 years ago.


Yesterday I uploaded another video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/GanBmJ5ptR4 It hashows {some views | some scenes | the view} near a weir built 1500 years ago. Yesterday I uploaded another video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/GanBmJ5ptR4 It shows {some views | some scenes | the view} near a weir built 1500 years ago.

Yesterday I uploaded another video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/GanBmJ5ptR4 It hashows some viewplaces near a weir built 1500 years ago. Yesterday I uploaded another video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/GanBmJ5ptR4 It shows some places near a weir built 1500 years ago.

'it has some views' is not wrong but a very unusual phrase and hard to get the meaning

Yesterday I uploaded another video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/GanBmJ5ptR4 It hashows some views near a weir built 1500 years ago. Yesterday I uploaded another video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/GanBmJ5ptR4 It shows some views near a weir built 1500 years ago.

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I enjoyed the views very much.


I enjoyed the views very much. I enjoyed the view very much.

You could say “I enjoyed these views,” but singular “view” is more natural given the context.

I enjoyed the views very much. I enjoyed the views very much.

here you can use views

I enjoyed the views very much. I enjoyed the view very much.

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They were more beautiful in my eyes than in the video.


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They were more beautiful in my eyesreal life than in the video. They were more beautiful in real life than in the video.

They were more beautiful in my eyesperson than in the video. They were more beautiful in person than in the video.

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I hope one day you guys can see them by yourself.


I hope one day you guys can see them by(for) yourself. I hope one day you guys can see them (for) yourself.

“See them by yourself” means you would do it alone, either unaccompanied or without assistance. “See them for yourself” and “see them yourself” are pretty much the same in this context, although the latter could imply “see and evaluate/judge them yourself.”

I hope one day you guys can see them byfor yourself. I hope one day you guys can see them for yourself.

'by yourself' would mean alone

I hope one day you guys can see them byfor yourself. I hope one day you guys can see them for yourself.

I hope one day you guys canget to see them by yourself. I hope one day you guys get to see them by yourself.

Another way to put it

There's also a small temple near the weir on the shore.


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It is old and somewhat worn, but it still maintains a sense of dignity.


It is old and somewhat worrun down, but it still maintains a sense of dignity. It is old and somewhat run down, but it still maintains a sense of dignity.

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Because in the temple, the person who built this weir is enshrined, and the people who repaired it throughout history are introduced and commemorated.


Because in the temple,This is because the person who built this weir is enshrined, in the temple and the people who repaired it throughout history are introduced and commemorated. This is because the person who built this weir is enshrined in the temple and the people who repaired it throughout history are introduced and commemorated.

Your original sentence was incomplete (it lacked a main verb, so I added “this is,” even though it’s a bit clumsy. A better solution would be to combine this sentence with the previous one.

Because in the temple, the person who built this weir is enshrined, and the people who repaired it throughout history are introducmentioned and commemorated. Because in the temple, the person who built this weir is enshrined, and the people who repaired it throughout history are mentioned and commemorated.

'introduced' is not wrong but not what a native would say.

Because in the temple, tThe person who built this weir is enshrined, in the temple and other people who have repaired ithe temple throughout history are introduced and commemorated there. The person who built this weir is enshrined in the temple and other people who have repaired the temple throughout history are introduced and commemorated there.

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