April 6, 2025
Happy but Tired
I traveled with my best friend during this holiday. We hadn't met for a long time, so we talked a lot these four days.
Now, my friend is heading to Wuhan, and I'm going to Shanghai.
It's always happy to have friends around you, but it's also a little tiring after hiking and walking a lot.
I want to have a rest early tonight.
这个假期我和我最好的朋友一起旅行的。我们很久没见了，所以这四天我们聊了很多。
现在，我的朋友去向了武汉，而我则要回上海。
身边有朋友总是令人开心的，但徒步走了很多路之后也会有点累。
今晚我想早点休息。
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Happy but Tired
I went traveleding with my best friend during this holiday.
I went traveling with my best friend during this holiday.
We hadn't met for a long time, so we talked a lot these four days.
Now, my friend is heading to Wuhan, and I'm going to Shanghai.
It's always happynice to have friends around you, but it's also a little tiring after hiking and walking a lot.
It's always nice to have friends around you, but it's also a little tiring after hiking and walking a lot.
I want to have a rest early tonight.
April 8, 2025
Thank you!
Have a nice day!
I travelled with my best friend during this holiday. I travelled with my best friend during this holiday.
We hadven't met for a long time, so we talked a lot these four days.
We haven't met for a long time, so we talked a lot these four days.
Now, my friend is heading to Wuhan, and I'm going back to Shanghai. Now, my friend is heading to Wuhan, and I'm going back to Shanghai.
Since you live in Shanghai, adding 'back' will be more natural.
It's always happlovely to have friends around you, but it's also a little tiring after hiking and walking a lot.
It's always lovely to have friends around you, but it's also a little tiring after hiking and walking a lot.
I want to have a rest early tonight.
Happy but Tired
We hadven't metseen each other for a long time, so we talked a lot theseduring these last four days.
We haven't seen each other for a long time, so we talked a lot during these last four days.
Now, my friend is heading to Wuhan, and I'm going to Shanghai.
Now, my friend is heading to Wuhan and I'm going to Shanghai.
It's always happyfun to have friends around you, but it's also a little tiring after hiking and walking a lot.
It's always fun to have friends around you, but it's also a little tiring after hiking and walking a lot.
I want to have a rest early tonight.
I want to rest early tonight.
April 7, 2025
Thank you so much!
Have a nice day!
Happy but Tired Happy but Tired
This is not incorrect, but the "usual" expression in English would be the other way around. We would say "Tired but Happy"
I traveled with my best friend during this holiday. I traveled with my best friend during this holiday.
Again, not incorrect, but it would be more common to say "I traveled with my best friend over the holidays".
We hadn't metseen each other for a long time, so we talked a lot during these four days.
We hadn't seen each other for a long time, so we talked a lot during these four days.
Now, my friend is heading to Wuhan, and I'm going to Shanghai.
It's always happyfun to have friends around you, but it's also a little tiring after hiking and walking a lot.
It's always fun to have friends around you, but it's also a little tiring after hiking and walking a lot.
"It" can't be happy, only a person or animal can be happy.
I want to have a restgo to bed early tonight.
I want to go to bed early tonight.
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Well done. I mostly just reworded some sentences to make them sound more natural. Your English is already so great!
April 7, 2025
Thanks again!
Have a great day!
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I traveled with my best friend during this holiday. I traveled with my best friend during this holiday. I traveled with my best friend during this holiday. Again, not incorrect, but it would be more common to say "I traveled with my best friend over the holidays". I travelled with my best friend during this holiday. I travelled with my best friend during this holiday.
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Happy but Tired Happy but Tired Happy but Tired This is not incorrect, but the "usual" expression in English would be the other way around. We would say "Tired but Happy" This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We hadn't met for a long time, so we talked a lot these four days.
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Now, my friend is heading to Wuhan, and I'm going to Shanghai. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Now, my friend is heading to Wuhan Now, my friend is heading to Wuhan, and I'm going back to Shanghai. Now, my friend is heading to Wuhan, and I'm going back to Shanghai. Since you live in Shanghai, adding 'back' will be more natural. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's always happy to have friends around you, but it's also a little tiring after hiking and walking a lot.
It's always "It" can't be happy, only a person or animal can be happy.
It's always
It's always
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I want to have a rest early tonight.
I want to
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