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The Internet Is Making Us Less Social: Agree Or Disagree?

The topic we are discussing is whether the internet is making us less social or not. Nowadays, internet is part of our everyday life. I can't imagine going a whole week without using social media, or simply without doing a little research when I don't know something. Is this good or bad? Talking about sociality, there are a lot of pros to consider. In the first place, on internet you can find a lot of people with your same interests and become friends with them, allowing you to increase your social circle. Secondly, you can communicate with your friends even if you're far from home. For example, if you're on vacation, you don't have to stop chatting or calling each others thanks to social media.
However, as we know, internet has also some negative sides. Firstly, a lot of teenagers are becoming obsessed with things like video games, avoiding going out with friends and preferring staying home playing online. In addition, many young boys and girls, when they see eachother, prefer playing a game online instead of real games.
In conclusion, from my perspective, considering every side, everyone should have access to internet, but it should be limited and controlled by parents for the younger ones.

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The Internet Is Making Us Less Social: Agree Or Disagree?

The topic we are discussing is whether the internet is making us less social or not.

Nowadays, internet is part of our everyday life.

I can't imagine going a whole week without using social media, or simply without doing a little research when I don't know something.

Is this good or bad?

Talking about sociality, there are a lot of pros to consider.

Secondly, you can communicate with your friends even if you're far from home.

Firstly, a lot of teenagers are becoming obsessed with things like video games, avoiding going out with friends and preferring staying home playing online.

In addition, many young boys and girls, when they see eachother, prefer playing a game online instead of real games.

In conclusion, from my perspective, considering every side, everyone should have access to internet, but it should be limited and controlled by parents for the younger ones.

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Secondly, you can communicate with your friends even if you're far from home.


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The Internet Is Making Us Less Social: Agree Or Disagree?


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Nowadays, internet is part of our everyday life.


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In addition, many young boys and girls, when they see eachother, prefer playing a game online instead of real games.


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In conclusion, from my perspective, considering every side, everyone should have access to internet, but it should be limited and controlled by parents for the younger ones.


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I can't imagine going a whole week without using social media, or simply without doing a little research when I don't know something.


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The topic we are discussing is whether the internet is making us less social or not.


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Is this good or bad?


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In the first place, on internet you can find a lot of people with your same interests and become friends with them, allowing you to increase your social circle.


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For example, if you're on vacation, you don't have to stop chatting or calling each others thanks to social media.


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Firstly, a lot of teenagers are becoming obsessed with things like video games, avoiding going out with friends and preferring staying home playing online.


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