June 25, 2025
The topic we are discussing is whether the internet is making us less social or not. Nowadays, internet is part of our everyday life. I can't imagine going a whole week without using social media, or simply without doing a little research when I don't know something. Is this good or bad? Talking about sociality, there are a lot of pros to consider. In the first place, on internet you can find a lot of people with your same interests and become friends with them, allowing you to increase your social circle. Secondly, you can communicate with your friends even if you're far from home. For example, if you're on vacation, you don't have to stop chatting or calling each others thanks to social media.
However, as we know, internet has also some negative sides. Firstly, a lot of teenagers are becoming obsessed with things like video games, avoiding going out with friends and preferring staying home playing online. In addition, many young boys and girls, when they see eachother, prefer playing a game online instead of real games.
In conclusion, from my perspective, considering every side, everyone should have access to internet, but it should be limited and controlled by parents for the younger ones.
The Internet Is Making Us Less Social: Agree Or Disagree?
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The topic for discussion is whether the internet is making us less social.
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The internet brings many social benefits.
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Second, you can communicate with your friends even when far from home.
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However, the internet also presents challenges.
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In addition, many children prefer playing a game online when they hang out instead of physical games.
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In my opinion, everyone should have access to the internet, but access should be limited and controlled for children by their parents.
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This is good! Usually “first” and “second” are used to list things when there’s a third item (or more), which is introduced with “finally.”
Nowadays, the internet is part of our everyday life. Nowadays, the internet is part of our everyday life.
In English, whenever talking about the internet in this context, it always has to have the article “the” in front of it
In the first place, on the internet you can find a lot of people with your same interests and become friends with them, allowing you to increase your social circle. In the first place, on the internet you can find a lot of people with your same interests and become friends with them, allowing you to increase your social circle.
However, as we know, the internet has also has some negative sides.
However, as we know, the internet also has some negative sides.
Firstly, a lot of teenagers are becoming obsessed with things like video games, avoiding going out with friends and preferring to staying home playing online.
Firstly, a lot of teenagers are becoming obsessed with things like video games, avoiding going out with friends and preferring to stay home playing online.
In conclusion, from my perspective, considering every side, everyone should have access to internet, but it should be limited and controlled by parents for the younger ones children.
In conclusion, from my perspective, considering every side, everyone should have access to internet, but it should be limited and controlled by parents for young children.
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This is great! Your English is amazing, you seem to have a very high level. Just some small grammar/sentence structure mistakes and some unnatural sounding phrasing. But other than that, this sounds as if a native speaker wrote it
The Internet Is Making Us Less Social: Agree Or Disagree?
The topic we are discussing is whether the internet is making us less social or not.
Nowadays, internet is part of our everyday life.
I can't imagine going a whole week without using social media, or simply without doing a little research when I don't know something.
Is this good or bad?
Talking about sociality, there are a lot of pros to consider.
In the first place, on the internet you can find a lot of people with your same interests and become friends with them, allowing you to increase your social circle. In the first place, on the internet you can find a lot of people with your same interests and become friends with them, allowing you to increase your social circle.
Sadly, in English you say "on the internet/Internet", not like in Italian, su internet, without article.
Secondly, you can communicate with your friends even if you're far from home.
For example, if you're on vacation, you don't have to stop chatting or calling each others thanks to social media.
For example, if you're on vacation, you don't have to stop chatting or calling each other thanks to social media.
However, as we know, internet has also has some negative sides.
However, as we know, internet also has some negative sides.
Firstly, a lot of teenagers are becoming obsessed with things like video games, avoiding going out with friends and preferring staying home playing online.
In addition, many young boys and girls, when they see eachother, prefer playing a game online instead of real games.
In conclusion, from my perspective, considering every side, everyone should have access to internet, but it should be limited and controlled by parents for the younger ones.
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In conclusion, from my perspective, considering every side, everyone should have access to internet, but it should be limited and controlled by parents for the younger ones. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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I can't imagine going a whole week without using social media, or simply without doing a little research when I don't know something. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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The topic we are discussing is whether the internet is making us less social or not. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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In the first place, on internet you can find a lot of people with your same interests and become friends with them, allowing you to increase your social circle. In the first place, on the internet you can find a lot of people with your same interests and become friends with them, allowing you to increase your social circle. In the first place, on the internet you can find a lot of people with your same interests and become friends with them, allowing you to increase your social circle. Sadly, in English you say "on the internet/Internet", not like in Italian, su internet, without article. In the first place, on the internet you can find a lot of people with your same interests and become friends with them, allowing you to increase your social circle. In the first place, on the internet you can find a lot of people with your same interests and become friends with them, allowing you to increase your social circle.
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For example, if you're on vacation, you don't have to stop chatting or calling each others thanks to social media.
For example, if you're on vacation, you don't have to stop chatting or calling each other
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However, as we know, internet has also some negative sides.
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Firstly, a lot of teenagers are becoming obsessed with things like video games, avoiding going out with friends and preferring staying home playing online. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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