June 20, 2020
"I need to do it, but I don't want to." It has been the most common phrase on my life. One of the resolutions that I made in the start of the year was learning English and French. Actually my french level improved so much, so I can fell a half happy and proud of myself, but on the other hand I haven't done my best in English, so I needed to do something.
I sometimes know when something is good for me, obviously which I study hard I'll learn faster, but the most difficult part is toward the procrastination line. To fight it, the routine is the best armor.
The routine makes me comfortable, with it I don't need to think about what am I doing or what am I going to do, I just do the same every day. This is awesome because I don't need to be animated with I'm doing, I just do it. Whatever, like everything isn't perfect, it isn't the solution for all my needs.
The routine makes me to much comfortable, furthermore I don't improve some skills that I need when they aren't on the daily routine, and to do it, I always need to toward or the procrastination line, or the routine prison line, which either is very hard.
Finally, the routine is something desirable, but you can't stay to much time doing the same old grind, so sometimes you need to change it. With it, you can always improve yourself.
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It has been the most common phrase oin my life.
"I need to do it, but I don't want to" has been the most common phrase in my life.
Langcorrect won't let me make it look like I want it to, but the phrase should be part of the sentence describing it.
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I sometimes know when something is good for me, which is obviously whichthat if I study hard I'll learn faster, but the most difficult part is toward the procrastination line.
The routine makes me comfortable, with it I don't need to think about what am I doing or what am I going to do, I just do the same thing every day.
This is awesome because I don't need to be animaexcited with I'm doing, I just do it.
WhatHowever, like everynothing isn't perfect, and it isn't the solution for all my needs.
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With ithat, you can always improve yourself.
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Very interesting piece, and glad to see you've started working on your english now!
I think two things to focus on from this entry:
1) "Too" is the spelling for when you need a phrase like "too much". When the "to" is describing that something is excessive, the spelling is "too", not "to".
2) English doesn't have the idea of a "line" in the way you've used it for "procrastination line" and "prison line".
Other than that, I think this was quite a good effort, hope you keep it up! :)
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Be careful of comma splices.
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With it, you can always improve yourself.
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It has been the most common phrase on my life.
"I need to do it, but I don't want to" has been the most common phrase in my life. Langcorrect won't let me make it look like I want it to, but the phrase should be part of the sentence describing it. |
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Actually my french level improved so much, so I can fell a half happy and proud of myself, but on the other hand I haven't done my best in English, so I needed to do something. Actually, my "Actually" is a transition word in this sentence, so it needs a comma. "French" is a proper noun (language), so it needs to be capitalized. You can't feel "a half happy", but rather "somewhat happy" - but it means the same thing. You should say "I needed to do something about it", because that means you are going to do change something about your English learning. Without the "about it", it's unclear.
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I sometimes know when something is good for me, obviously which I study hard I'll learn faster, but the most difficult part is toward the procrastination line.
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To fight it, the routine is the best armor. To fight it, the routine is the best To fight it, You’re talking about routine in general, so as it is something abstract, the definite article isn’t used unless you’re talking about a more specific situation. |
The routine makes me comfortable, with it I don't need to think about what am I doing or what am I going to do, I just do the same every day. The routine makes me comfortable "since" connects your points better here than "with it"
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Whatever, like everything isn't perfect, it isn't the solution for all my needs.
not sure what you were trying to say here, I hope I got what you meant?
Or as “everything is imperfect.” “Everything isn’t perfect” sounds like some things might be perfect even if others aren’t.
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With it, you can always improve yourself.
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