Jan. 14, 2021
Roma
I have a dog named Roma. Technically she is my sister's, but she lives in Germany now and the dog stayed with us. She is a stray, but we think she looks like a Rhodesian Ridgeback. Roma is only two years old and full of energy. This very beautiful dog absolutely loves playing. Her favorite toys are her ball and her rope. She also loves to be pet and she is very happy when someone gives her belly rubs.
She wasn't properly trained by my sister, so she isn't very compliant. She is extremely territorial and growls if you get near what she thinks is her territory. She is also a bit aggressive and I think she bit all of the family members, but It's been some time since she last bit someone. She is very destructive, but we hope it's because she is not an adult yet.
I had another dog that she didn't get along with. Her name was Cata and she died of cancer last year. She was the best dog ever. She was a very calm German Shepherd that didn't like to play at all. She was so quiet that sometimes we didn't even realize she was with us. We could accidentally step on her and she wouldn't even complain. She was amazingly good with the kids and loved to sleep with my younger brother.
Roma didn't like that Cata was so calm because she wanted to play, so she used to tackle her all the time and bite her tail. I think that now that Cata is gone, Roma behaves better.
Roma
I have a dog named Roma.
Technically she is my sister's, but she lives in Germany now and the dog stayed with us.
"She is" is commonly written/said as "She's".
You could say "so" instead of "and" here.
She is a stray, but we think she looks like a Rhodesian Ridgeback.
"She is" is commonly written/said as "She's".
Roma is only two years old and full of energy.
This very beautiful dog absolutely loves playing.
Her favorite toys are her ball and her rope.
She also loves to be pet and she is very happy when someone gives her belly rubs.
"She is" is commonly written/said as "She's".
She wasn't properly trained by my sister, so she isn't very compliant.
She is extremely territorial and growls if you get near what she thinks is "her territory".
"She is" is commonly written/said as "She's".
If you wan't to show emphasis (I guess? I don't really know how to phrase it) on the fact that you don't believe what's being said, you can put quotation marks ("") around it.
For example:
Hey that's mine! Ya, I'm sure it's "yours".
She is also a bit aggressive and I think she bithas bitten all of the family members at some point, but Iit's been some time since she last bit someone.
"She is" is commonly written/said as "She's".
She is very destructive, but we hope it's because she is not an adult yet.
"She is" is commonly written/said as "She's".
"Is not" is commonly written/said as "isn't".
I had another dog that she didn't get along with.
Her name was Cata and she died of cancer last year.
She was the best dog ever.
She was a very calm German Shepherd that didn't like to play at all.
She was so quiet that sometimes we didn't even realize she was with us.
We could accidentally step on her and she wouldn't even complain.
She was amazingly good with the kids and loved to sleep with my younger brother.
Roma didn't like that Cata was so calm because she wanted to play, so she used to tackle her all the time and bite her tail.
I think that now that Cata is gone, Roma behaves better.
Feedback
Great Job! Just a few corrections! From personal experience, I think that dogs become calmer as they get older, but they will chew anything when they're puppies!
Jan. 15, 2021
Thank you! Yeah, she chews the furniture all the time haha.
Roma
I have a dog named Roma.
Technically she is my sister's, but she lives in Germany now and the dog stayed with us.
She is a stray, but we think she looks like a Rhodesian Ridgeback.
Roma is only two years old and full of energy.
This very beautiful dog absolutely loves playing.
Her favorite toys are her ball and her rope.
She also loves to be pet and she is very happy when someone gives her belly rubs.
She wasn't properly trained by my sister, so she isn't very compliant.
She is extremely territorial and growls if you get near what she thinks is her territory.
She is also a bit aggressive and I think she bit all of the family members at one time or another, but It's been some time since she last bit someone.
Well written. I'd just a little designation of time to be more specific.
She is very destructive, but we hope it's because she is not an adult yet.
I had another dog that she didn't get along with.
Her name was Cata and she died of cancer last year.
She was the best dog ever.
She was a very calm German Shepherd that didn't like to play at all.
She was so quiet that sometimes we didn't even realize she was with us.
We could accidentally step on her and she wouldn't even complain.
She was amazingly good with the kids and loved to sleep with my younger brother.
Roma didn't like that Cata was so calm because she wanted to play, so she used to tackle her all the time and bite her tail.
I think that now that Cata is gone, Roma behaves better.
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Technically she is my sister's, but she lives in Germany now and the dog stayed with us. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Technically she is my sister's, but she lives in Germany now and the dog stayed with us. "She is" is commonly written/said as "She's". You could say "so" instead of "and" here. |
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She wasn't properly trained by my sister, so she isn't very compliant. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She is extremely territorial and growls if you get near what she thinks is her territory. This sentence has been marked as perfect! She is extremely territorial and growls if you get near what she thinks is "her territory". "She is" is commonly written/said as "She's". If you wan't to show emphasis (I guess? I don't really know how to phrase it) on the fact that you don't believe what's being said, you can put quotation marks ("") around it. For example: Hey that's mine! Ya, I'm sure it's "yours". |
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She is also a bit aggressive and I think she bit all of the family members, but It's been some time since she last bit someone. She is also a bit aggressive and I think she bit all of the family members at one time or another, but It's been some time since she last bit someone. Well written. I'd just a little designation of time to be more specific. She is also a bit aggressive and I think she "She is" is commonly written/said as "She's". |
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She was so quiet that sometimes we didn't even realize she was with us. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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