RThe role of computers in human life

Some people think computers are making everyonpeople lazier.

Whereas others believe these devices provide notoriumerous benefits in human life.

Through the internet, which can be accessed using a computer, an individual has the opportunity to research a particular subject.

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For instance, there are several highly reputable open-access scientific journals such as Elsevier or IEEE which are available online.

Aside from that, more and more humanspeople are communicating with people all around the globe thanks to the sole existence of computers.

Through these devices, I have interacted with people ofrom other countries, which helped me learn about their culture and language.

Using computersAdditionally, I have communicated with my sister who lives in another country.

Not only have computers have allowed me to learn about new cultures, but also helped me to communicate with my sister in Europe.

In closingonclusion, certain jobs have gotten easier since the existencebirth of computers.

To sum up, I firmly believe that human lives have been absolutely improved by computers.

People now have access to a vast amount of information written in open-access scientific journals.

The Role of cComputers in hHuman lLife

Some people think that computers are making everyone lazier, whereas others believe these devices provide many benefits in everyday life.

Whereas others believe these devices provide notorious benefits in human life.

I, myself, agree with the latter.

Through the internet, which can be easily accessed usingwith a computer, an individual has the opportunity to research a particular subject.

For instance, there are highly reputable open-access scientific journals such as Elsevier or IEEE, which are available online.

Thus, people can research from their lab or even their home without going through the burden of going to a library or waiting for a journal to arrive home, as it was done before the age of computers.

Aside from that, more and more humans are communicating with people all around the globe thanks to the sole existence of computers.

Through these devices, I have interacted with people of other countries, which has helped me learn about their culture and language.

Using computers, I have even communicated with my sister who lives in another country.

Not only computers have allowed me to learn about new cultures, but also helped me to communicate with my sister in Europe.

I would remove this, since you discuss both ideas in the previous sentences.

In closingFurthermore, certain jobs have gotten easier since the existence of computers.

Moreover, an artificial intelligence is being trained to detect and deal with mild diseases.

This allows doctors to focus only on the hard cases and for patients to get faster and more accurate treatment for common maladies.

RThe role of computers in human life

Whereas others believe these devices provide notoriousonly benefits into human life.

'notorious' means famous but for negative reasons

For instance, there are highly reputable open-access scientific journals such as Elsevier or IEEE which are available online.

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Aside from that, more and more humanspeople are communicating with people all around the globe thanks solely to the sole existence of computers.

Through these devices, I have interacted with people ofrom other countries, which helped me learn about their culture and language.

Not only have computers have allowed me to learn about new cultures, but also helped me to communicate with my sister in Europe.

In closing, certain jobs have gotbecome easier since the existencwidespread use of computers.

I think 'widespread use' is more accurate. Computers were around for a while before they provided much benefit to non-academics.

For instance, spreadsheets are largely used inby almost every department inof an enterprise.

Moreover, an artificial intelligence is being trained to detect and deal with mild diseases.

This allows doctors to focus only on the hard cases, and allows patients to get faster and more accurate treatment for common maladies.

To sum up, I firmly believe that human lives have been absolutely improved by computers.

Finally, these machines have made people's jobs easier for people.

The Role of cComputers in human lifethe Lives of Humans

Some people think computers are making everyone lazier whereas others believe these devices provide enormous benefits to the lives of humans.

"Notorious" has a negative connotation.

Whereas others believe these devices provide notorious benefits in human life.

This is not a complete sentence so I added this clause to the previous sentence.

Thus, people can do research from their labs or even their homes without going through the burden of going to a library or waiting for a journal to arrive home, as it was done before computers.

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Through these devices, I have interacted with people of other countries, which has helped me learn about their culture and language.

Not only cComputers have not only allowed me to learn about new cultures, but they also helped me to communicate with my sister in Europe.

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In closing, certain jobs have gotbecome easier since the existenceinvention of computers.

or (but this is colloquial and not for a formally written paper):

In closing, certain jobs have gotten easier since the invention of computers.

For instance, spreadsheets are largely used in almost every department in an enterprise company.

or

For instance, spreadsheets are largely used in almost every business.

Moreover, an artificial intelligence is being trained to detect and deal with mild diseases.

This allows doctors to focus only on the hard cases and difficult cases while allowing patients to getreceive faster and more accurate treatment for common maladies.

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