July 29, 2025
Robots
For this topic, I would like to share my opinion about the future. Due to the high demands about all technology, many features and technologies are developers for make more easiest our life, somethings goods, others bads, it’s depends who use. At any moment in your life, certainly you already heard something like this: “Robots will replace humans.” When I are just a child, I must confess, this is sound very scareful, however, I ever not agreed with this possibly, in my opinion, this not gonna fly, not just because the technology needs human to desenvolving they, sounds very weird to me, robots gained conscience and exterminating all humans, I don’t know, sounds much fictional.
Neste tópico, gostaria de compartilhar minha opinião sobre o futuro. Devido às altas demandas sobre toda a tecnologia, muitos recursos e tecnologias são desenvolvidos para tornar a nossa vida mais fácil, algumas coisas são boas, outras ruins, depende de quem usa. Em algum momento da sua vida, certamente você já ouviu algo assim: "Os robôs substituirão os humanos". Quando eu era criança, devo confessar, isso parecia muito assustador, no entanto, eu nunca concordei com isso, possivelmente, na minha opinião, isso não vai funcionar, não apenas porque a tecnologia precisa de humanos para desenvolvê-los, soa muito estranho para mim, robôs ganhando consciência e exterminando todos os humanos, eu não sei, soa muito fictício.
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Aug. 5, 2025
Thank you for all explanations dude
Robots
For this topic, I would like to share my opinion about the future.
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Great job! Just a few corrections!
Aug. 5, 2025
Oh, thank you dude, i'm feeling like a child learning english haha
Aug. 6, 2025
It's no problem! You should read how I write in Arabic lol
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Amazing job! Talking about abstract concepts in another language is really good!
Aug. 5, 2025
Oh, thank you dude, i'm feeling like a child learning english haha
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