Nov. 13, 2020
Robot World
Remote-controlled robots will start working at selected Family Mart in Tokyo this summer
When you reading this title, what will you think?
SCI-Fi movie? Horror movie?
I am ok with new things and idea.
So, next time when I go to Tokyo, I will go there and buy something.
Maybe some people will feel sad.
Because robot is taken human’s job.
Maybe some people will feel that is right.
Because the safety reason.
Few years ago (in HK) a 7-11 staff were killed by a shop theft.
Anyway, we are one step close to robot world.
Remote-controlled robots will start working at selected Family Marts in Tokyo this summer
When you reading this title, what willould you think?
SCI-Fi movie?
Horror movie?
I am ok with new things and ideas.
So, next time when I go to Tokyo, I will go there and buy something.
Maybe some people will feel sad.
Because a robot is takening a human’s job.
Maybe some people will feel that is right.
Because of the safety reason.
FA few years ago (in HK) a, 7-11 staff were killed byduring a shop theft.
You would use "by" if the staff were killed by people. I think shop theft is more of a situation caused by a person, so I used "during".
Anyway, we are one step closer to a robot world.
Remote-controlled robots will start working at selected Family Marts in Tokyo this summer
plural
When you reading this title, what willdo you think?
present tense when asking a rhetorical question
I am ok with new things and ideas.
must have parallel construction. If you have plural 'things' you must have plural 'ideas'
So, next time when I go to Tokyo, I will go there and buy something.
Maybe some people will feel sad about this.
Because a robot ihas taken a human’s job.
Maybe some people will feel that is right.
Anyway, we are one step closer to robot world.
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When you reading this title, what will you think? When you read present tense when asking a rhetorical question When |
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Anyway, we are one step close to robot world. Anyway, we are one step closer to robot world. Anyway, we are one step closer to a robot world. |
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SCI-Fi movie? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Horror movie? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Robot World |
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Remote-controlled robots will start working at selected Family Mart in Tokyo this summer Remote-controlled robots will start working at selected Family Marts in Tokyo this summer plural Remote-controlled robots will start working at selected Family Marts in Tokyo this summer |
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I am ok with new things and idea. I am ok with new things and ideas. must have parallel construction. If you have plural 'things' you must have plural 'ideas' I am ok with new things and ideas. |
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So, next time when I go to Tokyo, I will go there and buy something. So, next time This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Maybe some people will feel sad. Maybe some people will feel sad about this. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Because robot is taken human’s job. Because a robot Because a robot is tak |
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Maybe some people will feel that is right. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Because the safety reason. Because of the safety reason. |
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Few years ago (in HK) a 7-11 staff were killed by a shop theft.
You would use "by" if the staff were killed by people. I think shop theft is more of a situation caused by a person, so I used "during". |
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