May 20, 2020
Robert Hooke
Today we will talk about Robert Hooke, an English polymath, popularized as biologist and scientist because of his discovery of the cell and not less important his significant biological illustrations, that both was in his book "micrographia", one of the best selling books at that time.
Although Robert Hooke might be the best biological illustrator in his time, however we don't have any trustworthy reliable image of Robert Hooke today.
Notably because his long bitter relationship with Issac Newton, which start with Robert Hooke claim on gravity as plagiarization and attempt of Newton to erase his legacy, and the criticism continues between the two until Hooke death.
However, Hooke death wasn't enough to calm Newton, some historians suggest that Newton decides to burn all the paintings of Robert Hooke that we have immediately after his death.
in the end these are just theories and Nobody certainly knows if Newton has buried his portrait.
But despite this do you think this journal change your view about Newton?
*The attached image is a Hooke's drawing of a flea.
Today we will talk about Robert Hooke, an English polymath, who was popularized as biologist and scientist because of his discovery of the cell and not. No less important were his significant biological illustrations, that were both was in his book and in "micrographia", one of the best selling books at that time.
Normally, things are "popularized" rather than people, but it seemed to work with "who was popularized." Might also work with "made popular by..."
The sentence was getting quite long, so I broke it up. Also, very confusingly worded at the end there-- I THINK you're saying that his illustrations were featured in his book, Mircrophagia, one of best-selling books, but you say "both" and then don't mention a second thing... did you leave it out by accident, or were you trying to mention 2 features of the book (it had his discovery of the cell and the illustrations)? In that 2nd case, it doesn't work.
Although Robert Hooke might be the best biological illustrator inof his time, however we don't have any trustworthy reliable images of Robert Hooke today.
"Although" and "however" both introduce subordinate clauses. One of them needs to be the main clause.
Stylistically, I think you should go with just trustworthy OR reliable. "Any" means your object must be plural.
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You're missing many 's for possessives.
If I have the timeline correct here, it wasn't Hooke's plagiarization, it was Newton's, but that's not clear here so I think if I were you I would make it explicit with a few extra sentences.
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iIn the end these are just theories and Nnobody certainly knowsknows for certain if Newton has buried his portraits.
Burned, or buried?
But dDespite this, do you think this journal changes your view abouts on Newton?
*The attached image is a Hooke's drawing of a flea.
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Provocative topic! And very ambitious sentence building. Might want to take another pass at reviewing, some simple past was left off where it would have made a lot of sense, and review the 's possessive. Keep it up though :)
May 20, 2020
Thank you, in the first correction I have meant both (his discovery of the cell and the illustrations).
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Today we will talk about Robert Hooke, an English polymath, popularized as biologist and scientist because of his discovery of the cell and not less important his significant biological illustrations, that both was in his book "micrographia", one of the best selling books at that time. Today we will talk about Robert Hooke, an English polymath, who was popularized as biologist and scientist because of his discovery of the cell Normally, things are "popularized" rather than people, but it seemed to work with "who was popularized." Might also work with "made popular by..." The sentence was getting quite long, so I broke it up. Also, very confusingly worded at the end there-- I THINK you're saying that his illustrations were featured in his book, Mircrophagia, one of best-selling books, but you say "both" and then don't mention a second thing... did you leave it out by accident, or were you trying to mention 2 features of the book (it had his discovery of the cell and the illustrations)? In that 2nd case, it doesn't work. |
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Although Robert Hooke might be the best biological illustrator in his time, however we don't have any trustworthy reliable image of Robert Hooke today. Although Robert Hooke might be the best biological illustrator "Although" and "however" both introduce subordinate clauses. One of them needs to be the main clause. Stylistically, I think you should go with just trustworthy OR reliable. "Any" means your object must be plural. |
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Notably because his long bitter relationship with Issac Newton, which start with Robert Hooke claim on gravity as plagiarization and attempt of Newton to erase his legacy, and the criticism continues between the two until Hooke death. Notably because of his long bitter relationship with Is You're missing many 's for possessives. If I have the timeline correct here, it wasn't Hooke's plagiarization, it was Newton's, but that's not clear here so I think if I were you I would make it explicit with a few extra sentences. |
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However, Hooke death wasn't enough to calm Newton, some historians suggest that Newton decides to burn all the paintings of Robert Hooke that we have immediately after his death. However, Hooke death wasn't enough to calm Newton |
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in the end these are just theories and Nobody certainly knows if Newton has buried his portrait.
Burned, or buried? |
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But despite this do you think this journal change your view about Newton?
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*The attached image is a Hooke's drawing of a flea. *The attached image is |
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