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naho2863

Aug. 4, 2022

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Summer rain.

I love the sound of the raindrops falling on the ceiling of my yard and the smell of the wet soil of my plant pots.

Since I'm afraid of the lightning (falling on me) I only watch but if it's little rain I enjoy it.

The thunder remains me of my dog who passed away a year ago, her name was Brittany, and was so afraid of thunder because she used to live in the streets and that's why my family and I adopt her.

But seeing the water drops in the leaves and flowers after the rain relaxes and inspires me.


Me encanta el sonido de las gotas de lluvia cayendo sobre el techo de mi patio y el olor de la tierra mojada de mis macetas con plantas.

Desde que me asustan los rayos (cayendo en mi) Solo miro pero si es poca lluvia lo disfruto.

Los truenos me recuerdan a mi perrita que falleció hace ya un año, su nombre era Brittany, y estaba muy asustada de los truenos porque solía vivir en la calle y por eso mi familia y yo la adoptamos.

Pero ver las gotas de agua en las hojas y flores después de la lluvia me relaja e inspira.

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But seeing the water drops in the leaves and flowers after the rain relaxes and inspires me.

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naho2863

Aug. 8, 2022

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Summer rRain.

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Aug. 8, 2022

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I love the sound of the raindrops falling on the ceilingroof of my yardhouse and the smell of the wet soil ofin my plant pots.

Me, too!

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mari

Aug. 8, 2022

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Why Rain in capitals? and the final point.

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naho2863

Aug. 9, 2022

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It's a title so we capitalize the first letter of important words and use no punctuation to end it.

But seeing the water drops in the leaves and flowers after the rain relaxes and inspires me.

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Aug. 8, 2022

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Aug. 8, 2022

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Summer rain.

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Aug. 8, 2022

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I love the sound of the raindrops falling on the ceiling of my yard and the smell of the wet soil of my planted pots.

"on the ceiling" not sure what you were trying to say here.

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Aug. 8, 2022

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Since I'm afraid of the lightning (falling onhitting/striking me) I only watch but if it's little rain Ia light rain/drizzle I'll go out and enjoy it.

"I'll enjoy it" sounds strange in English. I interpreted this as going out and enjoying the rain.

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Aug. 8, 2022

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Summer rain.


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Summer rRain. Summer Rain

Summer rRain. Summer Rain

I love the sound of the raindrops falling on the ceiling of my yard and the smell of the wet soil of my plant pots.


I love the sound of the raindrops falling on the ceiling of my yard and the smell of the wet soil of my planted pots. I love the sound of the raindrops falling on my yard and the smell of the wet soil of my planted pots.

"on the ceiling" not sure what you were trying to say here.

I love the sound of the raindrops falling on the ceiling of my yardmy roof and the smell of the wet soil of my plant pootted plants. I love the sound of the raindrops falling on my roof and the smell of the wet soil of my potted plants.

I love the sound of the raindrops falling on the ceiling of my yardmy roof and the smell of the wet soil ofrom my plant pots. I love the sound of raindrops falling on my roof and the smell of the wet soil from my plant pots.

I love the sound of the raindrops falling on the ceilingroof of my yardhouse and the smell of the wet soil ofin my plant pots. I love the sound of the raindrops falling on the roof of my house and the smell of the wet soil in my plant pots.

Me, too!

Since I'm afraid of the lightning (falling on me) I only watch but if it's little rain I enjoy it.


Since I'm afraid of the lightning (falling onhitting/striking me) I only watch but if it's little rain Ia light rain/drizzle I'll go out and enjoy it. Since I'm afraid of the lightning (hitting/striking me) I only watch but if it's a light rain/drizzle I'll go out and enjoy it.

"I'll enjoy it" sounds strange in English. I interpreted this as going out and enjoying the rain.

Since I'm afraid of the lightning (fallpossibly striking on me), I only watch but if it's littlefrom indoors. But the light rain I enjoy it. Since I'm afraid of lightning possibly striking me, I only watch from indoors. But the light rain I enjoy.

Since I'm afraid of the lightning (falling onstriking me) I only watchobserve, but if it's little rains I enjoy it. Since I'm afraid of lightning (striking me) I only observe, but if it rains I enjoy it.

Since I'm afraid of the lightning (fallstriking on me), I only watch it but, if it's a little rain, I enjoy it. Since I'm afraid of lightning (striking me), I only watch it but, if it's a little rain, I enjoy it.

The thunder remains me of my dog who passed away a year ago, her name was Brittany, and was so afraid of thunder because she used to live in the streets and that's why my family and I adopt her.


The thunder remainds me of my dog who passed away a year ago, h. Her name was Brittany, and was so afrai. She was terrified of thunder because she used to live ion the streets and t. That's why my family and I adopted her. The thunder reminds me of my dog who passed away a year ago. Her name was Brittany. She was terrified of thunder because she used to live on the streets. That's why my family and I adopted her.

A run-on sentence. I changed "so afraid" to "terrified" as it implies a "higher-level of fear". "So afraid" also works. Just showing another word choice to get the feeling across.

The thunder remains me of my dog who passed away a year ago, her name was Brittany, and she was so afraid of thunder because she used to live in the streets and t. That's why my family and I adopted her. The thunder remains me of my dog who passed away a year ago, her name was Brittany, and she was so afraid of thunder because she used to live in the streets. That's why my family and I adopted her.

The thunder remainds me of my dog who passed away a year ago, her name was Brittany, and she was so afraid of thunder because she used to live in the streets and that's whyhow my family and I came to adopting her. The thunder reminds me of my dog who passed away a year ago, her name was Brittany, and she was so afraid of thunder because she used to live in the streets and that's how my family and I came to adopting her.

The thunder remainds me of my dog who passed away a year ago, h. Her name was Brittany, and she was so afraid of thunder because she used to live ion the streets andso that's why my family and I adopted her. The thunder reminds me of my dog who passed away a year ago. Her name was Brittany and she was so afraid of thunder because she used to live on the streets so that's why my family and I adopted her.

But seeing the water drops in the leaves and flowers after the rain relaxes and inspires me.


But sSeeing the water raindrops ion the leaves and flowers after the rain relaxes and inspires me. Seeing the raindrops on the leaves and flowers relaxes and inspires me.

But seeing the water drops idrops of water on the leaves and flowers after the rain relaxes and inspires me. But seeing the drops of water on the leaves and flowers after the rain relaxes and inspires me.

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