March 28, 2020
Lucky charms
Have you seen the slough of a snake? In Japan, it is said that keeping the slough of a snake in the wallet makes you rich. Especially, I hear that the slough of a white snake is the most efficacious. I wonder why. The white snake is believed that as a messenger of a god in Japan. Is there a original lucky charm in your country?
ヘビの抜け殻を見たことがありますか？日本では、ヘビの抜け殻を財布に入れておくとお金持ちになれると言われています。特に、白ヘビの抜け殻が一番効果があると聞きました。なんででしょうね？白ヘビは日本では神の使いとされています。あなたの国には独自の縁起物はありますか？
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Lucky charms
Have you ever seen the sloughhed skin of a snake?
Have you ever seen the shed skin of a snake?
slough は正しいけど、ほとんど使われていない。
In Japan, it is said that keeping the sloughkin of a snake in theone's/your wallet makes you rich.
In Japan, it is said that keeping the skin of a snake in one's/your wallet makes you rich.
Especially, I hear that the slough of a white snake is the most efficacious.
I wonder why.
The white snake is believed that aso be a messenger of a god in Japan.
The white snake is believed to be a messenger of a god in Japan.
Is there an original lucky charm in your country? Is there an original lucky charm in your country?
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Great job! 頑張ろうね！
March 30, 2020
Thank you for correcting my sentences! I learned that we call slough “shed skin” 😊
Have you seen the slough of a snake?a snake shed its skin?
Have you seen a snake shed its skin?
In Japan, it is said that keeping the slough of a snake skin thein your wallet will makes you rich.
In Japan, it is said that keeping snake skin in your wallet will make you rich.
Especially, I heard that the sloughkin of a white snake is the most efficaciousective.
I heard that the skin of a white snake is the most effective.
I wonder why.
The white snake is believed that aso be a messenger of a god in Japan.
The white snake is believed to be a messenger of a god in Japan.
Is there a originaln item that's considered a lucky charm in your country?
Is there an item that's considered a lucky charm in your country?
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In the Philippines, having a maneki-neko as a good luck charm in someone's house or a store they own is common.
March 29, 2020
Thank you for correcting my writing. Manekineko! Manekineko is in Japan, too ^_^ I didn’t know Philippine have a manekineko, too. Thank you for teaching me!
Lucky charms
Have you ever seen the sloughhedding of a snake?
Have you ever seen the shedding of a snake?
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In Japan, it is said that keeping the slough of a snake in theyour wallet makes you rich.
In Japan, it is said that keeping the slough of a snake in your wallet makes you rich.
It feels more natural for me to use 'your' instead of 'the' here
Especially, I hear that the slough of a white snake is the mostespecially efficacious.
I hear that the slough of a white snake is especially efficacious.
The white snake is believed that aso be a messenger of a god in Japan.
The white snake is believed to be a messenger of a god in Japan.
Is there a originalDo you have a peculiar lucky charm in your country?
Do you have a peculiar lucky charm in your country?
I tried looking into 独自 for this translation. Normally, we wouldn't use "original" to describe cultural things. You may also use "unique" here.
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Overall, it was well written! I've also never used the word "slough" in my life, so I had to double check my understanding 😆 Great job!
March 29, 2020
Thank you for correcting my sentences ^_^！ Surely we don’t have the chances to use the word ”slough” lol
March 29, 2020
I was thinking if you were a biology graduate or something. 😂
March 30, 2020
I also never heard of slough! Thanks for teaching me something new :-)
March 30, 2020
I didn’t know “slough” is such a unusual word😳 I learned. Thank you!
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Is there a original lucky charm in your country?
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