Dec. 6, 2022
Russell Peters's Stand-up
Last Saturday, I went to a stand-up.
Stand-up is an art about the offense. If someone sits in the front of the performing platform, they usually become a part of a stand-up show —— be made a fool by the comedians. So I was very nervous but hopefully, my given ticket made me out of this exciting interaction, I curled up into my seat in the mountain and laughed with my classmates.
The show was really fun. In the first half, Russell baited almost half people in the first line. Then he shared his thought about the gap between generations, and typical Russell jokes -- stereotype about different races. His venomous tongue makes me scream with laughter.
Newark is a good place and I would visit there again.
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Russell Peters's Stand-up
Russell Peters' Stand-up
If a name ends with an "s," we don't add an "'s" to make it possessive. We just add an apostrophe after the final "s."
Last Saturday, I went to a stand-up performance. Last Saturday, I went to a stand-up performance.
Stand-up is an art about the offense.
Stand-up is an art about offense.
If someone sits in thedirectly in front of the performing platformstage, they usually become a part of athe stand-up show —— be, that is, being made a fool by the comedians.
If someone sits directly in front of the stage, they usually become a part of the stand-up show, that is, being made a fool by the comedians.
So I was very nervous but, hopefully, my given ticket madethe ticket given to me took me out of this exciting interaction,. I curled up into my seat (in the mountain?) and laughed with my classmates.
So I was very nervous but, hopefully, the ticket given to me took me out of this exciting interaction. I curled up into my seat (in the mountain?) and laughed with my classmates.
The show was really fun.
In the first half, Russell baited almost half of the people in the first linerow.
In the first half, Russell baited almost half of the people in the first row.
For audience seating, we call it a row of seats.
Then hHe shared his thoughts about the gap between generations, and then told typical Russell jokes -- stereotypes about different races.
He shared his thoughts about the gap between generations and then told typical Russell jokes -- stereotypes about different races.
His venomous tongue makesde me scream with laughter.
His venomous tongue made me scream with laughter.
Newark is a good place and I would visit ithere again.
Newark is a good place and I would visit it again.
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Good work!
Dec. 6, 2022
Thanks Mari, I learnt many new concepts about how to describe performance from your detailed and clear explanation!
Dec. 6, 2022
So I was very nervous but, hopefully, my given ticket madethe ticket given to me took me out of this exciting interaction,. I curled up into my seat (in the mountain?) and laughed with my classmates.
I would love to say that my seat is in Tier 3 which is on the third floor and see the stage like that I am on the top of a mountain haha, would you love to help me to describe it concisely? Thanks for your help.
Dec. 6, 2022
ohh! I see. So I'd say, "My seat was in Tier 3 of the third floor so, looking at the stage, it was as if I were standing on top of a mountain." Basically, you were in the nose-bleed seats. :D
Dec. 9, 2022
ohh! I see. So I'd say, "My seat was in Tier 3 of the third floor so, looking at the stage, it was as if I were standing on top of a mountain." Basically, you were in the nose-bleed seats. :D
OMG, the word nose-bleed is so humorous to describe the seat, the seat is far away from the stage, it’s a little pity, but use the word ‘nose-bleed’ to describe that ‘I would be really exciting to sit at so high level’ , it’s like a self-mimic! it really makes my day, English is so fun, thanks!
Dec. 9, 2022
OMG, the word nose-bleed is so humorous to describe the seat, the seat is far away from the stage, it’s a little pity, but use the word ‘nose-bleed’ to describe that ‘I would be really exciting to sit at so high level’ , it’s like a self-mimic! it really makes my day, English is so fun, thanks!
You're very welcome! I'm glad you're enjoying a new word! :)
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Russell Peters's Stand-up
Russell Peters' If a name ends with an "s," we don't add an "'s" to make it possessive. We just add an apostrophe after the final "s." |
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Last Saturday, I went to a stand-up. Last Saturday, I went to a stand-up performance. Last Saturday, I went to a stand-up performance. |
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Stand-up is an art about the offense.
Stand-up is an art about |
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If someone sits in the front of the performing platform, they usually become a part of a stand-up show —— be made a fool by the comedians.
If someone sits |
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So I was very nervous but hopefully, my given ticket made me out of this exciting interaction, I curled up into my seat in the mountain and laughed with my classmates.
So I was very nervous but, hopefully, |
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The show was really fun. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In the first half, Russell baited almost half people in the first line.
In the first half, Russell baited almost half of the people in the first For audience seating, we call it a row of seats. |
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Then he shared his thought about the gap between generations, and typical Russell jokes -- stereotype about different races.
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His venomous tongue makes me scream with laughter.
His venomous tongue ma |
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Newark is a good place and I would visit there again.
Newark is a good place and I would visit it |
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