SThe school year in Russia starts on September 1 and ends on May 31. The school year in Russia starts on September 1 and ends on May 31.

SThe school year in Russia starts on September 1 and ends on May 31. The school year in Russia starts on September 1 and ends on May 31.

I want to describe my typical school day how it was in my school in 2009. I want to describe my typical school day in 2009.

I want to describe a typical school day and how it was in my school in 2009. I want to describe a typical school day and how it was in my school in 2009.

FBefore entering inthe school, we, pupils, building, we had to proofve that we haved a clean pair of shoes in our school bag. Before entering the school building, we had to prove that we had a clean pair of shoes in our school bag.

ForTo entering in school, we,us pupils, had to proofve that we haved clean pair of shoes in our school bag. To enter school, us pupils had to prove that we had clean pair of shoes in our school bag.

We musthad to change our shoes firstly and then go to the lessons. We had to change our shoes first and then go to the lessons.

We musthad to change our shoes firstly and then go to theour lessons. We had to change our shoes first and then go to our lessons.

must does not exist in the past tense - replace with "had to"

If someone forgot his clean shoes, he had to go back home and take itget them. If someone forgot his clean shoes, he had to go back home and get them.

If someone forgot his clean shoes, heor her/their shoes, he or she/they had to go back home and take itget them. If someone forgot his or her/their shoes, he or she/they had to go back home and get them.

Shoes - refer to as "them" because plural

The classes (lessons in Russia) started at 8am. The classes (lessons in Russia) started at 8am.

The (lessons in Russia) part could be omitted.

The classes (lessons in Russia) started/would start at 8am AM. The classes (lessons in Russia) started/would start at 8 AM.

Everacy class takesook 45 minutes and there iwas a 10- minutes break between every class. Eacy class took 45 minutes and there was a 10 minute break between every class.

Every class takesook 45 minsutes, and there iwas a 10-minutes break between every class. Every class took 45 minutes, and there was a 10-minute break between every class.

At about 10:40, we had a 25- minutes break for lunch. At about 10:40, we had a 25 minute break for lunch.

At about 10:40, we had a 25-minutes break for lunch. At about 10:40, we had a 25-minute break for lunch.

Nobody eats hise their food. Nobody ate their food.

We all eate food whichthat was prepared in school. We all ate food that was prepared in school.

We all eate the food which was prepared in school. We all ate the food prepared in school.

During the school day we mustn't go away fromweren't allowed to leave the school building. During the school day we weren't allowed to leave the school building.

During the school day, we mustcouldn't go away from the school building. During the school day, we couldn't go away from the school building.

Usually, we had 6-7 classes per day and then we canould go home. Usually, we had 6-7 classes per day and then we could go home.

Usually, we had 6-7 classes per day, and then we canould go home. Usually, we had 6-7 classes per day, and then we could go home.

As for the classes, they were really boring. As for the classes, they were really boring.

If you are a pupil in rRussian school, you are not allowed to be creatively. If you are a pupil in Russian school, you are not allowed to be creative.

If you are a pupil in ra Russian school, you are not allowed to be creatively. If you are a pupil in a Russian school, you are not allowed to be creative.

Creative = adjective Creatively = adverb

All you haveare allowed to do is answer onexactly as in student's presented in the textbooks and not argue with a teacher. All you are allowed to do is answer exactly as presented in the textbooks and not argue with a teacher.

All you have to do is answer only as in student's using the textbooks and not argue with a teacher. All you have to do is answer using the textbook and not argue with a teacher.

Student's books = textbooks Your meaning here is unclear. Did you have to read out loud passages from the textbooks or answer written questions in them?

Now I understand that school in Russia was aslike being in prison for 10 years. Now I understand that school in Russia was like being in prison for 10 years.

Now I understand that school in Russia was aslike being in prison for 10 years. Now I understand that school in Russia was like being in prison for 10 years.