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Sea Fishing
My family and I just finished our sea fishing, it lasted for more than two hours far out at sea. Four families took part in the sea fishing. We drove the boat on by one on the way to out sea and I was the first driver and the one proposed taking turns driving,lol. I also was the first one who successfully cached a fish, my daughter was the second one. Unfortunately, my wife was kind of seasick so she didn't join the fishing. At last our family caught the most fish, but we didn't have the most varieties. Anyway, my daughter felt we were the champions and was really excited.
It was really an unforgettable experience.
My family and I just finished our sea fishing trip, it lasted for more than two hours far out at sea.
It might be more natural to split the far out at sea into its own clause or sentence even.
We drove the boat one by one on the way to out sea and I was the first driver and the one who proposed taking turns driving, lol.
I was also was the first one who successfully cachedught a fish, my daughter was the second one.
"caught" is the past tense of "catch"
At lastIn the end our family caught the most fish, but we didn't have the most varieties.
"At last" -> "After a long time waiting, this expected/hoped for thing happened"
"In the end" -> "Once everything was over"
Sea Fishing
My family and I just finished our sea fishing, it lasted for more thanwhich took over two hours far out at sea.
Four families took part in the sea fishing.
We drove the boat one by one [or: we took turns driving the boat] on the way to out sea and I was the first driver and the one who proposed taking turns driving,lol.
I also was the first one who successfully cachedught a fish, and my daughter was the second one.
Unfortunately, my wife was kind of seasick so she didn't join the fishing.
At last[In the end | Ultimately], our family caught the most fish, but we didn't have the most varieties.
Anyway, my daughter felt we were the champions and was really excited.
It was really an unforgettable experience.
Sea Fishing
My family and I just finished our sea fishing, it (trip), which lasted for more than two hours far out at sea.
Four families took part in the sea fishing.
We drove the boat one by one on the way to out to sea, and I was the first driver and the one who proposed taking turns driving, lol.
I also was the first one who successfully cachedught a fish, and my daughter was the second (one).
Unfortunately, my wife was kind of seasick so she didn't join the fishing.
At lastIn the end, our family caught the most fish, but we didn't have the {most varieties | greatest variety}.
Anyway, my daughter felt we were the champions and was really excited.
It was really an unforgettable experience.
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That sounds fun. Did you bring any fish back to cook and eat?
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My family and I just finished our sea fishing, it lasted for more than two hours far out at sea. My family and I just finished our sea fishing My family and I just finished our sea fishing, My family and I just finished our sea fishing trip, it lasted for more than two hours far out at sea. It might be more natural to split the far out at sea into its own clause or sentence even. |
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Four families took part in the sea fishing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We drove the boat on by one on the way to out sea and I was the first driver and the one proposed taking turns driving,lol. We drove the boat one by one on the way We drove the boat one by one [or: we took turns driving the boat] on the way to out sea and I was the first driver and the one who proposed taking turns driving,lol. We drove the boat one by one on the way to out sea and I was the first driver and the one who proposed taking turns driving, lol. |
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I also was the first one who successfully cached a fish, my daughter was the second one. I also was the first one who successfully ca I also was the first one who successfully ca I was also "caught" is the past tense of "catch" |
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Unfortunately, my wife was kind of seasick so she didn't join the fishing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At last our family caught the most fish, but we didn't have the most varieties.
"At last" -> "After a long time waiting, this expected/hoped for thing happened" "In the end" -> "Once everything was over" |
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Anyway, my daughter felt we were the champions and was really excited. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was really an unforgettable experience. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Sea Fishing This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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