yesterday
平凡的一天
今天是个美好的春日，不过有点凉。阳光明媚。 今天是学校的观摩日。行政助理观摩了我的课，我也观摩了一位同事的课。她上了一堂非常好的课。学生们虽然是初学者，但已经练习了一些简短的对话。 现在我有点累了，打算做点刺绣放松一下。
平凡的一天
今天是个美好的春日，不过有点凉。
架不住阳光明媚呀。
你的上一句用“不过”转折之后，整个语气氛围往下走，所以第二句的“阳光明媚”要接一下情绪。
今天是学校的观摩日。
行政助理观摩了我的课，我也观摩了一位同事的课。
她上了一堂非常好的课。
学生们虽然是初学者，但已经练习了一些简短的对话。
现在我有点累了，打算做点刺绣放松一下。
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不错哦，“观摩”这个词用得很好！
today
谢谢你的帮助！
平凡的一天
今天是个美好的春日，不过有点凉。
阳光明媚。
今天是学校的观摩日。
行政助理观摩了我的课，我也观摩了一位同事的课。
她上了一堂非常好的课。
学生们虽然是初学者，但已经练习了一些简短的对话。
现在我有点累了，打算做点刺绣放松一下。
Feedback
Marvelously written
today
谢谢你！
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