June 2, 2020
Camping
The number of people who enjoy camping has been increasing. It is true that the best way to take a break is to be in the forest and feel the atmosphere of the nature, escaping from the busy life in the cities. On the other hand, it is a shame that some of them break off the branches excessively and left their garbage there. That is a kind of exploitation of the nature, isn’t it?
週末にキャンプを楽しむ人が増えてきました。確かに、都会生活でたまった疲れをいやすためには、自然の中でのんびりするのが一番でしょう。ただ残念なのは、木々の枝を折ったり、ごみをそのままにして帰ったりする人がいることです。これでは、自分の疲れはとれても、自然の方はいい迷惑だと思います。
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Camping
The number of people who enjoy camping has been increasing.
It is true that the best way to take a break is to be in the forest and feel the atmosphere of the nature, escaping from the busy life in the cities.and escape from busy city life is to go to a forest and be surrounded by nature,
It is true that the best way to take a break and escape from busy city life is to go to a forest and be surrounded by nature,
This is another way that you can say this. :-)
On the other hand, it is a shame that some of thempeople excessively break off the branches excessively and leftave their garbage therebehind.
On the other hand, it is a shame that some people excessively break off branches and leave their garbage behind.
That is a kind of exploitation of theing nature, isn’t it?
That is kind of exploiting nature, isn’t it?
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It really is a shame that people do this. :-( Thankfully, I don't see it happen too often here.
Camping
The number of people who enjoy camping has been increasing.
It is true that the best way to take a break is to be in the forest and feel the atmosphere of the nature, escaping from the busy life inof the citiesy.
It is true that the best way to take a break is to be in the forest and feel the atmosphere of nature, escaping the busy life of the city.
This sounds more natural.
On the other hand, it is a shame that some of them break off the branches excessively and leftave their garbage there.
On the other hand, it is a shame that some of them break off the branches excessively and leave their garbage there.
Since "break" is present tense it make sense that "left" should have been in present tense as well.
That is a kind of exploitation of the nature, isn’t it?
That is a kind of exploitation of nature, isn’t it?
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Your writing is really good! Keep it going!
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It is true that the best way to take a break is to be in the forest and feel the atmosphere of the nature, escaping from the busy life in the cities.
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