Sept. 23, 2023
Riverside Cafe
Today, I enjoy a solo holiday-life, because my partner has to work on a day-off.
My holiday started at 1 pm. After saying goodbye to her, I couldn’t overcome drowsiness and slept until lunchtime.
When I ate brunch, I decided to go out. I’m coming to my favorite cafe. This has a terrace facing a river. I ordered Latte and wrote down this diary.
Now, I’m considering the dinner plan.
Today, I enjoyed a solo holiday-lifeday off on my own, because my partner has to work on atheir day- off.
I’m sure you can understand enjoy -> enjoyed. Hyphens are tough, but they aren’t needed here. Because you said partner, I just assumed you wanted to be gender-neutral, so I put “their”, but given that you mention “her” later on it’s your choice.
My holiday started at 1 pm.
After saying goodbye to her, I couldn’t overcome drowsinessgot drowsy and slept until lunchtime.
シンプルイズベストだねやっぱり
WhenAfter I ate brunch, I decided to go out.
Can’t “eat brunch” while “going out”.
I’m coming went to my favorite cafe.
“coming” -> present tense, since you’re already at the cafe it would be “went” (“came” would not be used in this context for reasons that someone else might be able to explain)
ThisIt has a terrace facing a river.
I ordered a Latte and wrote down thisin my diary.
A diary is a collection of writings. You could also say “I wrote down this diary entry” though that’s a bit of a 硬い表現
Now, I’m considering thethinking about my dinner plans.
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Sounds like a really relaxing day! Hope you got the well-deserved rest. Enjoy dinner!
Sept. 23, 2023
It really just comes down to usage. If you saw a dozen or so sentences with “consider” vs. “thinking about” it might come intuitively. Also “consider” has a much deeper connotation, when in the end it’s just dinner plans.
Thank you!
Sept. 23, 2023
Now, I’m considering thethinking about my dinner plans.
What’s the difference between considering and thinking about?
Sept. 23, 2023
What’s the difference between considering and thinking about?
It really just comes down to usage. If you saw a dozen or so sentences with “consider” vs. “thinking about” it might come intuitively. Also “consider” has a much deeper connotation, when in the end it’s just dinner plans.
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Today, I enjoy a solo holiday-life, because my partner has to work on a day-off. Today I’m sure you can understand enjoy -> enjoyed. Hyphens are tough, but they aren’t needed here. Because you said partner, I just assumed you wanted to be gender-neutral, so I put “their”, but given that you mention “her” later on it’s your choice. |
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My holiday started at 1 pm. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After saying goodbye to her, I couldn’t overcome drowsiness and slept until lunchtime. After saying goodbye to her, I シンプルイズベストだねやっぱり |
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When I ate brunch, I decided to go out.
Can’t “eat brunch” while “going out”. |
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I’m coming to my favorite cafe. I “coming” -> present tense, since you’re already at the cafe it would be “went” (“came” would not be used in this context for reasons that someone else might be able to explain) |
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This has a terrace facing a river.
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I ordered Latte and wrote down this diary. I ordered a Latte and wrote A diary is a collection of writings. You could also say “I wrote down this diary entry” though that’s a bit of a 硬い表現 |
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Now, I’m considering the dinner plan. Now, I’m |
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