Oct. 20, 2021
Riding My Bicycle
When I was young, my grandfather bought a 4 wheeled bicycle for me.
It was my first bicycle, and I was very glad to have it.
At first, it was hard to ride because I was not trained.
However, I tried to ride again and again, I could ride it soon.
Now, riding is one of my favorite habits.
Sometimes, I go by bicycle to Han river where is 40 km far away from my home.
I am able to reduce my stress, and take my health while riding my bicycle.
One day, I want to travel with my children with bicycles.
Riding My Bicycle
When I was young, my grandfather bought a 4 four-wheeled bicycle for me.
Write numbers in words instead. (eg. write "five" instead of "5")
It was my first bicycle, and I was very glad to have it.
At first, it was hard to ride because I was not trained.
However, I tried to ride it again and again. Soon, I could ride it soon.
Now, riding is one of my favorite haobbites.
The word "habit" is typically used for negative tendencies (eg. biting nails, itching skin, shaking legs). "Hobbies" is the word you would want to use here.
Sometimes, I go by bicycle to the Han river, whereich is 40 kmforty kilometers far away from my home.
Don't use abbreviations like "km" or "kg" , instead write out the full word (eg. "kilometers" "kilograms")
I am able to reduce my stress, and take care of my health while riding my bicycle.
One day, I want to travel with my children with bicycles.
Feedback
For a beginner, this is very well written. You are very good at structuring sentences. You need to be careful with abbreviations and the usage of some words like "the". Otherwise, it is really good! Well done! :)
Oct. 21, 2021
Thank you so much!
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Riding My Bicycle This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I was young, my grandfather bought a 4 wheeled bicycle for me. When I was young, my grandfather bought a Write numbers in words instead. (eg. write "five" instead of "5") |
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It was my first bicycle, and I was very glad to have it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At first, it was hard to ride because I was not trained. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, I tried to ride again and again, I could ride it soon. However, I tried to ride it again and again. Soon, I could ride it |
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Now, riding is one of my favorite habits. Now, riding is one of my favorite h The word "habit" is typically used for negative tendencies (eg. biting nails, itching skin, shaking legs). "Hobbies" is the word you would want to use here. |
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Sometimes, I go by bicycle to Han river where is 40 km far away from my home. Sometimes, I go by bicycle to the Han river, wh Don't use abbreviations like "km" or "kg" , instead write out the full word (eg. "kilometers" "kilograms") |
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I am able to reduce my stress, and take my health while riding my bicycle. I am able to reduce my stress, and take care of my health while riding my bicycle. |
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One day, I want to travel with my children with bicycles. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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