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July 30, 2025

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rich

hi... i want to become very rich successful woman. i don't know how to do it but i will. i started learning english for my dream. i will do all of the things for being rich.


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rRich

hHi... iI want to become a very rich and successful woman.

iI don't know how to do it, but iI will.

iI started learning eEnglish for my dream.

iI will do all of the things for beingeverything to be rich.

rRich

hHi... iI want to become a very rich successful woman.

iI don't know how towill I do it, but iI will.

iI started learning english forto achieve my dream.

iI will do all of the things for beingeverything I can to become rich.

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Great job!
Take care that the 'I' used to refer to yourself is always capitalized even if it's not at the beginning of the sentence.

rRich

hHi... iI want to become very rich, successful woman.

i don't know how to do it but iI will.

i started learning eEnglish forto achieve my dream.

i will do all of the things for beingeverything I can to be rich.

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Great English!

rich


rRich

rRich

rRich

hi... i want to become very rich successful woman.


hHi... iI want to become very rich, successful woman.

hHi... iI want to become a very rich successful woman.

hHi... iI want to become a very rich and successful woman.

i don't know how to do it but i will.


i don't know how to do it but iI will.

iI don't know how towill I do it, but iI will.

iI don't know how to do it, but iI will.

i started learning english for my dream.


i started learning eEnglish forto achieve my dream.

iI started learning english forto achieve my dream.

iI started learning eEnglish for my dream.

i will do all of the things for being rich.


i will do all of the things for beingeverything I can to be rich.

iI will do all of the things for beingeverything I can to become rich.

iI will do all of the things for beingeverything to be rich.

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