Jan. 12, 2024
Rice Noodles
I’m home alone now, because my parents went to travel to Taiwan.
I want to go to Taiwan also.
In Taiwan, I want to go to Hsinchu city.
Hsinchu city is famous for producing bifun, rice noodles, so I want to go there and eat some fried bifun.
I like to eat fried bifun, so I want to compare to original bifun and the one which eat in Japan.
両親が台湾旅行にでかけてしまったので、今家に一人だ。
私も台湾に行きたい。
台湾では新竹に行きたい。
新竹はビーフンの産地なので、行って、焼きビーフンを食べたい。
私は焼きビーフンが好きなので、本場のビーフンと日本で食べるビーフンの味がどう違うのか比べてみたい。
Rice Noodles
I’m home alone now, because my parents went to travel to Taiwan.
OR "my parents travelled to Taiwan"
I want to go to Taiwan alstoo.
In Taiwan, I want to go to Hsinchu city.
Hsinchu city is famous for producing bifun, rice noodles, sowhich is why I want to go there and eat some fried bifuno Hsinchu.
I like to eat fried bifun, so I want to compare to original bifun and the one which eat in Japan.
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Now I want to try bifun!
Jan. 13, 2024
Thank you for your corrections .
I’m home alone now, because my parents went toare travel toing in Taiwan.
Small thing, not that important.
I want to go to Taiwan alstoo.
Hard to explain but "too" sounds slightly more natural at the end of sentences like this.
In Taiwan, I want to go to Hsinchu city.
Hsinchu city is famous for producing bifun, (aka rice noodles, so I want to go there and eat some fried bifun.
Not a correction, but 米粉 in Japanese is like just one kind of 粉 so this may be confusing depending on who you're talking to. Food words get really messy but in English we'd say "rice noodles" or specifically the Japanese 米粉 is usually just "rice vermicelli" but this will mean something different to someone speaking Chinese.
I like to eat fried bifun, so I want to compare to original bifun and the one which eatauthentic bifun to what we have in Japan.
This sentence is fine but you can get it a little bit clearer by removing redundancy if you want. There was nothing wrong with it though.
For food, we tend to use "authentic" in this context. "The one" sounds a little specific if you're not talking about a specific shop.
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I hope you get to go to Taiwan soon! The flights from Japan aren't very long and the food there is good and cheap.
Jan. 13, 2024
Thank you for your corrections and comments. They are very useful.
Yes, It was very difficult for me to explain Chinsese food in English.
I want to go to Taiwan within this year.
I’m home alone now, because my parents went to travel to Taiwan.
The "travel to" is a little unnatural.
I want to go to Taiwan alstoo.
I like to eat fried bifun, so I want to compare tohe original bifun andto the one which eat in Japan.
Jan. 13, 2024
Thank you for your corrections.
Rice Noodles
I’m home alone now, because my parents went to travelling to Taiwan.
or "... because my parents went to Taiwan on vacation."
I want to go to Taiwan also.
In Taiwanparticular, I want to go to Hsinchu city.
Your original sentence is grammatically correct, but I think it sounds more natural this way.
Hsinchu city is famous for producing bifun, or rice noodles, so I want to go there and eat some fried bifun.
I like to eat fried bifun, so I want to compare tohe original bifun and the oneto that which I geat in Japan.
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Sounds delicious!
Jan. 13, 2024
Thank you for your corrections.
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