Dec. 14, 2020
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Rice cake, called mochi in Japan, is regarded as a dangerous food. It is common to enjoy freshly made mochi with family and relatives in the new year holidays. However, freshly cooked mochi is so sticky that children and old people tend to be suffocated, and people are killed by it every year. Therefore, someone calls mochi New Year's murderer. Don't try to swallow a big piece of mochi.
Rice cake, often called mochi in Japan, is regarded as a dangerous food.
It is common to enjoy freshly made mochi with family and relatives ion the nNew yYear and holidays.
However, freshly cooked mochi is so sticky that children and old people tend to become suffocated if they eat it, and people are killed by it every year.
Therefore, someon people calls mochi, “the New Year's murderer."
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Very interesting. I never knew that about mochi. Do you know if there's an age restriction or any warning labels shown before people can consume mochi? For example, "Children under 3 years old cannot consume mochi?"
Dec. 15, 2020
Thank you for your correction. There is no age restriction, but a warning is written in red letters on a package. For example, "When eating, please be careful not to choke." and "Please cut into small pieces and chew well."
Dec. 15, 2020
Thanks for the explanation. Never would have thought that a beloved dessert could be so deadly!
Rice Cake
Rice cake, called mochi in Japan, is regarded as a dangerous food.
It is common to enjoy freshly made mochi with family and relatives in the nduring New yYear holidays.
The other commenter is also correct, but it might sometimes be said like this. I don't know why the s get's added to new years, it isn't plural. It's just one of those English things.
Therefore, someon people calls mochi the New Year's murderer.
When in doubt just add the definitive particle.
You could be silly and say: Therefore, the people call the mochi the New Years murderer.
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Rewrite for fun:
Mochi, which is a Japanese word for a rice cake, is known as a dangerous food. During the New Years holiday family and friends often enjoy it, freshly made, for the holidays. However, because it is quite sticky children and the elderly often choke to death on it. Thus it is often referred to as the New Year's murderer.
Dec. 15, 2020
Thank you for your correction and nice summary!
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Rice cake, called mochi in Japan, is regarded as a dangerous food. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Rice cake, often called mochi in Japan, is regarded as a dangerous food. |
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It is common to enjoy freshly made mochi with family and relatives in the new year holidays. It is common to enjoy freshly made mochi with family and relatives in The other commenter is also correct, but it might sometimes be said like this. I don't know why the s get's added to new years, it isn't plural. It's just one of those English things. It is common to enjoy freshly made mochi with family and relatives |
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However, freshly cooked mochi is so sticky that children and old people tend to be suffocated, and people are killed by it every year. However, freshly cooked mochi is so sticky that children and old people tend to become suffocated if they eat it, and people are killed by it every year. |
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Therefore, someone calls mochi New Year's murderer. Therefore, some When in doubt just add the definitive particle. You could be silly and say: Therefore, the people call the mochi the New Years murderer. Therefore, some |
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Don't try to swallow a big piece of mochi. |
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