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Rhapsody on a Piece of Rachmaninoff (Part D)

"Concerto vs Concertante"

"Rhapsody on a Theme of Paganini" is not a concerto, unlike other Rachmaninoff's compositions for piano and orchestra. It is a concertante piece, i.e. it is similar to a concerto in character but does not follow all of its rules. For example, Rhapsody is a single-movement composition, whereas a concerto must consist of three movements. Here we come to the first analogy between the piece and life: We too have no movements in life, which is a constant flow that terminates only with our death. However, we can outline movements, as Rachmaninoff did, dividing his Rhapsody into three sections corresponding to the three movements of a concerto: a slow movement preceded and followed by fast movements. Still, life, like the Rhapsody, has to be performed in a single stretch, none part of it is self-contained.

However, it is easy to divide life into these interdependent parts that are smaller than movements, particularly for younger people. Those under twenty-five have lived through one to two movements at best, and they don't comprehend them, but they know how to mark up their lives - with years! These years for us are the same as the variations for the Rhapsody. Precisely, the main difference between the Rhapsody and a concerto and between life and fiction is that everything consists of variations, not of movements with the formulated conventional structure of contrasting themes, internal development, and so on. This is a serious statement that has far-reaching implications. I will devote most of this article to proving that life is a series of variations and what that means for everybody.


Before reading this, please read previous parts to understand what I'm writing about here. And please follow me on langcorrect to edit subsequent instalments of the Rhapsody. I am working on a very detailed essay, which promises to be compelling for many classical music fans, especially for Rachmaninoff's aficionados.

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"Concerto vs Concertante" "Rhapsody on a Theme of Paganini" is not a concerto, unlike other Rachmaninoff's compositions for piano and orchestra.

It is a concertante piece, i.e.

it is similar to a concerto in character but does not follow all of its rules.

For example, Rhapsody is a single-movement composition, whereas a concerto must consist of three movements.

Here we come to the first analogy between the piece and life: We too have no movements in life, which is a constant flow that terminates only with our death.

However, we can outline movements, as Rachmaninoff did, dividing his Rhapsody into three sections corresponding to the three movements of a concerto: a slow movement, preceded by and followed by fast movements.

from what you've written this means that the slow movement is in the middle. if you mean the slow movement is first, remove "preceded by and"

Still, life, like the Rhapsody, has to be performed in a single stretch, none part of it is self-contained.

However, it is easy to divide life into these interdependent parts that are smaller than movements, particularly for younger people.

Those under twenty-five have lived through one to two movements at best, and they don't compreheunderstand them, but they know how to mark upeasure their lives - with years!

comprehend feels unnatural for this one

To us, these years for us are the same asare just like the variations for the Rhapsody.

PTo be precisely, the main differences between the Rhapsody and, a concerto and between, life, and fiction is that everything consists of variations, not of movements with the formulated conventional formulaic structure of contrasting themes, internal development, and so on.

"precisely" to start a sentence is used mostly to agree with someone else.
"differences" because you are comparing 4 things

This is a serious statement that has far-reaching implications.

I will devote most of this article to proving that life is a series of variations and what that means for everybody.

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Legeartis

Sept. 11, 2024

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Thanks for the corrections and explanations! Are you sure I should place a comma before the past participle "preceded"? It relates to the last item in the main cause and, according to this resource: https://ell.stackexchange.com/questions/162594/comma-with-participle-clause, it should have no comma.

Rhapsody on a Piece of Rachmaninoff (Part D)


"Concerto vs Concertante" "Rhapsody on a Theme of Paganini" is not a concerto, unlike other Rachmaninoff's compositions for piano and orchestra.


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It is a concertante piece, i.e.


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it is similar to a concerto in character but does not follow all of its rules.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

For example, Rhapsody is a single-movement composition, whereas a concerto must consist of three movements.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Here we come to the first analogy between the piece and life: We too have no movements in life, which is a constant flow that terminates only with our death.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

However, we can outline movements, as Rachmaninoff did, dividing his Rhapsody into three sections corresponding to the three movements of a concerto: a slow movement preceded and followed by fast movements.


However, we can outline movements, as Rachmaninoff did, dividing his Rhapsody into three sections corresponding to the three movements of a concerto: a slow movement, preceded by and followed by fast movements.

from what you've written this means that the slow movement is in the middle. if you mean the slow movement is first, remove "preceded by and"

Still, life, like the Rhapsody, has to be performed in a single stretch, none part of it is self-contained.


Still, life, like the Rhapsody, has to be performed in a single stretch, none part of it is self-contained.

However, it is easy to divide life into these interdependent parts that are smaller than movements, particularly for younger people.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Those under twenty-five have lived through one to two movements at best, and they don't comprehend them, but they know how to mark up their lives - with years!


Those under twenty-five have lived through one to two movements at best, and they don't compreheunderstand them, but they know how to mark upeasure their lives - with years!

comprehend feels unnatural for this one

These years for us are the same as the variations for the Rhapsody.


To us, these years for us are the same asare just like the variations for the Rhapsody.

Precisely, the main difference between the Rhapsody and a concerto and between life and fiction is that everything consists of variations, not of movements with the formulated conventional structure of contrasting themes, internal development, and so on.


PTo be precisely, the main differences between the Rhapsody and, a concerto and between, life, and fiction is that everything consists of variations, not of movements with the formulated conventional formulaic structure of contrasting themes, internal development, and so on.

"precisely" to start a sentence is used mostly to agree with someone else. "differences" because you are comparing 4 things

This is a serious statement that has far-reaching implications.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I will devote most of this article to proving that life is a series of variations and what that means for everybody.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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