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giovaelpe

June 27, 2023

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The first time I write in English here

I feel very confident about my English, however, because I've never taken part in any course or class, maybe my English isn't as good as I think it is, so I am going to write some random thoughts and let's see how I do it.
Last week I went to see the Flash movie and I loved it, it's a shame how bad the movie is doing at the box-office, that means we probably won't see any sequel, we'll have to wait for the new movies that James Gunn is making, he is now the new DC's co-ceo along side with Peter Zafran.
I feel a bit stuck with my German, I try to study for one hour each day, and once a week I write something here, but I've noticed that I am making the same mistakes every time, I don't know what should I do in order for me to improve on such things.
I bought a new Keyboard, but I feel so stupid, I didn't pay attention when buying it, it is an English keyboard, so the keys have a different distribution and there is no "ñ", I could ask for a refund but I feel is not the right thing to do because it is my fault, I didn't pay attention; I didn't modify the key's distribution on my operating system because I remember where the keys are, so maybe I don't need it, it is still a little uncomfortable because the English keyboard hat fewer keys, those 2 "><" are now for me almost impossible to make.

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I feel a bit stuck with my German, I try to study for one hour each day, and once a week I write something here, but I've noticed that I am making the same mistakes every time, I don't know what should I do in order for me to improve on such things.

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giovaelpe

June 27, 2023

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The first time I write in English here


The first time I write in English here The first time I write in English here

Id probably say My first time writing in English here. The "i write" that you have in the middle is incorrect

I feel very confident about my English, however, because I've never taken part in any course or class, maybe my English isn't as good as I think it is, so I am going to write some random thoughts and let's see how I do it.


I feel very confident about my English, however, because I've never taken part in any course or class, maybe my English isn't as good as I think it is, so I am going to write some random thoughts and let's see how I do it. I feel very confident about my English, however, because I've never taken part in any course or class, maybe my English isn't as good as I think it is, so I am going to write some random thoughts and let's see how I do

Or let's see how well i do. You don't need the it.

I feel very confident about my English, h. However, because I've never taken part in any course or class, maybe my English isn't as good as I think it is, s. So I am going to write some random thoughts and let's see how I do it. I feel very confident about my English. However, because I've never taken part in any course or class, maybe my English isn't as good as I think it is. So I am going to write some random thoughts and see how I do.

In general, short sentences sound more natural in English. In particular, the meaning of "however, because" is ambiguous when used as you wrote it.

Last week I went to see the Flash movie and I loved it, it's a shame how bad the movie is doing at the box-office, that means we probably won't see any sequel, we'll have to wait for the new movies that James Gunn is making, he is now the new DC's co-ceo along side with Peter Zafran.


Last week I went to see the Flash movie and I loved it,. it's a shame how bad the movie is doing at the box-office,. that means we probably won't see any sequel, we'll have to wait for the new movies that James Gunn is making,. he is now the new DC's co-ceo along side with Peter Zafran. Last week I went to see the Flash movie and I loved it. it's a shame how bad the movie is doing at the box-office. that means we probably won't see any sequel, we'll have to wait for the new movies that James Gunn is making. he is now the new DC's co-ceo along side Peter Zafran.

You should have more periods in here ie more sentences rather than just 1. Your English is great though

Last week I went to see the Flash movie and I loved it, i. It's a shame how bad the movie is doing at the box-office, t. That means we probably won't see any sequel, w. We'll have to wait for the new movies that James Gunn is making, -- he is now the new DC's co-ceo along side with Peter Zafran. Last week I went to see the Flash movie and I loved it. It's a shame how bad the movie is doing at the box-office. That means we probably won't see any sequel. We'll have to wait for the new movies that James Gunn is making -- he is now the new DC co-ceo along with Peter Zafran.

Yours is perfectly fluent, this just flows a little better.

I feel a bit stuck with my German, I try to study for one hour each day, and once a week I write something here, but I've noticed that I am making the same mistakes every time, I don't know what should I do in order for me to improve on such things.


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I feel a bit stuck with my German,. I try to study for one hour each day, and once a week I write something here, but I've noticed that I am making the same mistakes every time,. I don't know what should I do in order for me to improve on such things. I feel a bit stuck with my German. I try to study for one hour each day, and once a week I write something here, but I've noticed that I am making the same mistakes every time. I don't know what should I do in order for me to improve on such things.

Yours is perfectly fluent, this just flows a little better.

I bought a new Keyboard, but I feel so stupid, I didn't pay attention when buying it, it is an English keyboard, so the keys have a different distribution and there is no "ñ", I could ask for a refund but I feel is not the right thing to do because it is my fault, I didn't pay attention; I didn't modify the key's distribution on my operating system because I remember where the keys are, so maybe I don't need it, it is still a little uncomfortable because the English keyboard hat fewer keys, those 2 "><" are now for me almost impossible to make.


I bought a new Keyboard, but I feel so stupid, I didn't pay attention when buying it, it is an English keyboard, so the keys have a different distribution and there is no "ñ", I could ask for a refund but I feel that is not the right thing to do because it is my fault, I didn't pay attention; I didn't modify the key's distribution on my operating system because I remember where the keys are, so maybe I don't need it, it is still a little uncomfortable because the English keyboard hats fewer keys, those 2 "><" are now for me almost impossible to make. I bought a new Keyboard, but I feel so stupid, I didn't pay attention when buying it, it is an English keyboard, so the keys have a different distribution and there is no "ñ", I could ask for a refund but I feel that is not the right thing to do because it is my fault, I didn't pay attention; I didn't modify the key's distribution on my operating system because I remember where the keys are, so maybe I don't need it, it is still a little uncomfortable because the English keyboard has fewer keys, those 2 "><" are now for me almost impossible to make.

You need more periods but again, your English is absolutely great

I bought a new Keyboard, but I feel so stupid, because I didn't pay attention when buying it, i. It is an English keyboard, so the keys have a different distribution and there is no "ñ.", I could ask for a refund but I feel is not the right thing to do because it is my fault, since I didn't pay attention;. I didn't modify the key's' distribution on my operating system because I remember where the keys are, so maybe I don't need it, but it is still a little uncomfortable because the English keyboard hats fewer keys,: those 2 "><" are now for me almost impossible to makefor me to press. I bought a new Keyboard, but I feel so stupid because I didn't pay attention when buying it. It is an English keyboard, so the keys have a different distribution and there is no "ñ." I could ask for a refund but I feel is not the right thing to do because it is my fault, since I didn't pay attention. I didn't modify the keys' distribution on my operating system because I remember where the keys are, so maybe I don't need it, but it is still a little uncomfortable because the English keyboard has fewer keys: those 2 "><" are now almost impossible for me to press.

Yours is perfectly fluent, this just flows a little better.

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