Jan. 9, 2020
Rewriting My Journals
This year I have decided to rewrite all my journals that get corrections.
I have already rewritten my previous journals from this year.
I guess it’s one of the good ways to learn languages!
I put the date I rewrote them at the bottom of the journals.
I didn’t know all corrections would disappear when I rewrote it the way they corrected it!
(Corrected on Jan. 9th)
私は今年、添削してもらった日記を全て書き直すことに決めました。今年から、私の前の日記をすでに書き直しています。それは言語を学ぶ良い方法の一つではないかと思います！日記の下に、書き直した日付を記しています。添削してもらったように書き直すと、全ての添削文が消えてしまうことを知りませんでした！
This year, I decided to rewrite my past journals thatwhich got corrections this year.
"Which" is better here as "got corrections this year" is non-essential additional information.
Jan. 9, 2020
Thank you for the correction!
Well, could you tell me how can I write it?🤔
I wanted to mean,
“I will rewrite my journals I wrote this year. (I’m not sure I’ll do it on them in the last year.)”
Jan. 9, 2020
Ah, I understand. In that case, I would write: This year I have decided to rewrite all my journals that get corrections. I have already rewritten my previous journals from this year. I put the date I rewrote them at the bottom of the journals.
Jan. 9, 2020
Thank you so much!
It helped a lot✨😊
ありがとうございます！
To rRewrite ming My jJournals
Titles are capitalized.
IThis year I have decided to rewrite my pastrevious journals that got corrections this year.
This is more natural and easier to read/understand.
I put the date I rewriote it onthem at the bottom of the journals.
I didn’t know all corrections would disappear when I rewriote them the way they were corrected!
Feedback
Nice job.
Jan. 9, 2020
Thanks for the correction!
I learned to write “-ing” form on titles!
Jan. 9, 2020
Ah, I understand. In that case, I would write: This year I have decided to rewrite all my journals that get corrections. I have already rewritten my previous journals from this year. I put the date I rewrote them at the bottom of the journals.
To rRewriteing my journals
This year I decided to rewrite my past journals that got corrections this year.
I guess it’s one ofa good ways of to learning languages!
I put the date I rewriote it on the bottom of the journals.
I didn’t know all corrections would disappear when I rewriote it the way they corrected it!
Jan. 9, 2020
Thank you fo the correction!
To rewrite my journals
I decided this year to rewrite my past journals that got corrections this year.
Your sentence is not wrong, but I thought maybe you wanted to say that you will do the rewriting this year, but for journals that you wrote last year, is that correct? If so, the way I wrote it is clearer.
I guess it’s one of the good ways tof learning languages!
I put the date I rewrite it on the bottom of the journals.
I didn’t know all corrections would disappear when I rewriote it the way they corrected it!
Feedback
Interesting strategy! I hope it's helpful.
Jan. 9, 2020
Thank you for the correction!
Well, at the moment I think I will rewrite journals that I wrote this year. If I have more time, I may rewrite journals I wrote last year... but I’m not sure.😅
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Rewriting My Journals |
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This year I have decided to rewrite all my journals that get corrections. |
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I have already rewritten my previous journals from this year. |
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I guess it’s one of the good ways to learn languages! |
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I put the date I rewrote them at the bottom of the journals. |
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I didn’t know all corrections would disappear when I rewrote it the way they corrected it! |
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