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sho

May 22, 2022

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I wanna speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥

Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️

By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.


B: Excuse me. Do you speak English?
A: Uh... sorry. I’m bad at English. Can I help you with something?".
B: Do you know where I can find a Toho Cinemas?
A: Is there one in this city?
B: Yes, Probably.
A: Uh... sorry. I don't know. I'm not too busy, so I'll check now and I can show you, if you want.
B: Oh, really?
A: Of course!
B: Oh, thank you. I’ll take you up on that.
A: You’re welcome. Then, give me a minute, let me check.
B: Thanks!
A: Is this the right place?
B: Well... yes! This is it!
A: Okay, then. Let's go.

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B: Do you know where I can find the/a Toho Cinemas?

I'm not too busy, so I'll check just now and I can show you, if you want/like.

Then,Just give me a minute, and let me check.

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Well done :)

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sho

May 23, 2022

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Thank you so much!! :)

I’m bad at English.


A: Uh... sorry.


Revised giving directions 13


Revised: giving directions 13

I wanna speak like a native!!


Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥


Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?


You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!


I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏


Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.


I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️


By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.


B: Excuse me.


Do you speak English?


Can I help you with something?


".


B: Do you know where I can find a Toho Cinemas?


B: Do you know where I can find the/a Toho Cinemas?

A: Is there one in this city?


B: Yes, Probably.


A: Uh... sorry.


I don't know.


I'm not too busy, so I'll check now and I can show you, if you want.


I'm not too busy, so I'll check just now and I can show you, if you want/like.

B: Oh, really?


A: Of course!


B: Oh, thank you.


I’ll take you up on that.


A: You’re welcome.


Then, give me a minute, let me check.


Then,Just give me a minute, and let me check.

B: Thanks!


A: Is this the right place?


B: Well... yes!


This is it!


A: Okay, then.


Let's go.


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