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sho

May 22, 2022

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I wanna speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥

Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️

By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.



B: Pardon me. How can I get to Akabane station?
A: Oh wait, gimme a minute, okay? (※I'm using an app to look up train lines.)
B: That app is good. What's its name?
A: Oh, it’s called "Japan travel".
I guess this is really useful for foreigners because you can look up Japanese train lines in English. Anyway, let's get back to the main topic.
(※I'm using that app to explain)
Do you understand how to get there from this screen?
If you’re able to, perhaps downloading the app might do the trick?
B: Yes, I understand! Can I download it from the app store?
A: Yes!
B: What was it again?
A: "Japan travel".
B: Ok!
A: So, is it alright?
B: Yes. Thank you so much! It’s very helpful!!
A: You’re welcome! Have a good trip!
B: Yes! Take care!!
A: You too!

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Revised gGiving dDirections 12

All content words in a title should be capitalized.

I wanna speak like a native!!

Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥

Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?

You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏

Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.

I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️

By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.

B: Pardon me.

How can I get to Akabane station?

A: Oh wait, gimme a minute, okay?

(※I'm using an app to look up train lines. )

B: That app is good.

What's its name?

A: Oh, it’s called "Japan tTravel".

I guess this is really useful for foreigners because you can look up Japanese train lines in English.

Anyway, let's get back to the main topic.

(※I'm using thate app to explain)

Do you understand how to get there from this screen?

If you’re able to, perhaps downloading the app might do the trick?

B: Yes, I understand!

Can I download it from the app store?

A: Yes!

B: What was it again?

A: "Japan tTravel".

B: Ok!

A: So, is it alright?

B: Yes.

Thank you so much!

It’s very helpful!!

A: You’re welcome!

Have a good trip!

B: Yes!

Take care!!

A: You too!

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sho

May 23, 2022

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Thank you so much!!🙇‍♂️

Revised giving directions 12


Revised gGiving dDirections 12

All content words in a title should be capitalized.

I wanna speak like a native!!


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Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥


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Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?


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You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.


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I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️


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By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.


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B: Pardon me.


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How can I get to Akabane station?


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A: Oh wait, gimme a minute, okay?


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(※I'm using an app to look up train lines. )


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B: That app is good.


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What's its name?


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A: Oh, it’s called "Japan travel".


A: Oh, it’s called "Japan tTravel".

I guess this is really useful for foreigners because you can look up Japanese train lines in English.


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Anyway, let's get back to the main topic.


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(※I'm using that app to explain)


(※I'm using thate app to explain)

Do you understand how to get there from this screen?


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If you’re able to, perhaps downloading the app might do the trick?


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B: Yes, I understand!


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Can I download it from the app store?


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A: Yes!


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B: What was it again?


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A: "Japan travel".


A: "Japan tTravel".

B: Ok!


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A: So, is it alright?


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B: Yes.


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Thank you so much!


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It’s very helpful!!


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A: You’re welcome!


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Have a good trip!


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B: Yes!


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Take care!!


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A: You too!


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