May 22, 2022
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I wanna speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang！ 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️
By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.
B: Pardon me. How can I get to Akabane station?
A: Oh, yeah. Gimme a minute, ok?(※I'm using an app to look up train lines.)
B: That app is good. What's its name?
A: Well, "Japan travel".
I guess this is so useful for foreigners because you can look up Japanese train lines in English. Anyway, let's get back to the main topic.
(※I'm using that app to explain)
Can you understand the explanation when you look at this screen? If you can, I think if you downloaded it that would solve the problem? Or if you don't wanna download it, I can show you with my app.
B: Well... I think..... I got it. But I'll pass now.
A: Okay. Then let me explain.
B: Thank you!
A: As of now, please ride the train leaving at 15:15 heading towards Nakameguro from platform 1, and get off at Ueno.
And then take the train leaving at 15:55 heading towards Koganei from platform 5 of the JR, and that train will take you to Akabane.
B: Got it! What does JR mean by the way?
A: A railway company. It has many train lines all over Japan.
B: I see.
A: If you can't catch the 55-minute train, get on the next train heading towards Takasaki on the same platform!
B: Mu-huh.
So, I take the train leaving at 15:15 heading towards Nakameguro from platform 1, and get off at Ueno and then take the train leaving at 15:55 heading towards Koganei from platform 5 of the JR, or towards Takasaki.
A: That is correct.
Also the first train is the Tobu Skytree Line, the next is the JR Utunomiya Line. But if you fail to catch the 55-minute train, the line will also change from the Utsunomiya line to the Takasaki line.
B:Oh, I got it.
Does that app tell you the time of the next train?
A: Yes, this is it.
It seems that the train you take from Ueno leaves every 10 minutes or so. Why don't you take a picture of this, just in case?
B Yeah! Exactly! I will!
Ok. Thank you.
A: Oh, also again, Japanese trains are of various types, such as local, rapid, section express, limited express, semi-express, and they they stop at different stations depending on the train, so even if they have the same line's name and platform, so make sure that the time and destination in the app match the train you are on.
B: Where does it say express or and stuff like that in this app?
A: Well... I don't know, haha. But, as long as the time and destination of the train you wanna take isn't wrong, it'll work!
Also, haha. Transferring trains at Ueno is a bit difficult, so if you get confused, just ask the station staff or someone looks kind.
B: Why is it difficult?
A: I think you have to exit the ticket gate and walk a bit. Probably.
B: I see.
A: Oops! I've speaked too much!
Your train's arriving soon!!
B: Oh my god, really?!
A: Anyway, the best of luck!!
B: Oh, thank you so much! I really appreciate it. (He started running.)
A: You're welcome! your first train from No.1! Take care!
B: I got it! Thank you! You too!
I wannat to speak like a native!!
Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang！ 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️
By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.
B: Pardon me.
How can I getCould you give me directions to Akabane station?
A: Oh, yeahYes, that's no problem.
Gimme a minute, okWould you like me to look that up on an app on my phone?
B: That app is good.
What's its name?
A: Well, "Japan travel".
I guessthink this is soapp is very useful for foreigners because you can look up Japanese train lines in English.
Anyway, let's get back to the main topic.
CanDo you understand the explanation when you look aton thise screen?
If you can, I think if youdo, you can downloaded it that would solve the problem?o help you with finding your way.
Or if you don't wannat to download it on your phone, I can show you with my app on mine.
B: Well...
I think.....
I got it.
But I'll pass for now.
A: Okay.
Then let me explain.
B: Thank you!
A: As of now, please ride the train leaving at 15:15 heading towards Nakameguro from platform 1, and get off at Ueno.
And then take the train leaving at 15:55 heading towards Koganei from platform 5 of the JR, and that train will take you to Akabane.
B: Got it!
What does JR mean by the way?
A: AJR is a railway company.
It has many train lines all over Japan.
B: I see.
A: If you can't catch the 55-minute train, get on the next train heading towards Takasaki on the same platform!
So, I take the train leaving at 15:15 heading towards Nakameguro from platform 1, and get off at Ueno and then take the train leaving at 15:55 heading towards Koganei from platform 5 of the JR, or towards Takasaki.
A: That is correct.
Also the first train is the Tobu Skytree Line, the next is the JR Utunomiya Line.
But if you fail to catch the 55-minute train, the line will also change from the Utsunomiya line to the Takasaki line.
B:Oh, I got it.
Does that app tell you the time of the next train?
A: Yes, this is it.
It seems that the train you take from Ueno leaves every 10 minutes or so.
Why don't you take a picture of this, just in case?
B Yeah!
Exactly!
I will!
Ok.
Thank you.
A: Oh, also again, Japanese trains are of various type, there are many different types of Japanese trains, such as local, rapid, section express, limited express, semi-express, and they. The stations they stop at different stations depending on the train, so even if they have the same line's name and platform, s between train types. Even if two train types travel along the same line, they can stop at different stations. You need to make sure that the time and destination in the app match the train you are on.
B: Where does it say express or and stuff like thatI can see details about the train in thise app?
A: Well...
I don't know, haha.
But, as long as the time and destination of the train you wannat to take isn't wrong, it'll work!
Transferring trains at Ueno is a bit difficult, so if you get confused, just ask the station staff or someone looks kind.
B: Why is it difficult?
A: I think you have to exit the ticket gate and walk a bit.
Probably.
B: I see.
I've speakeaid too much!
Your train's arriving soon!!
B: Oh my god, really?
A: Anyway, the best of luck!!
B: Oh, thank you so much!
I really appreciate it.
A: You're welcome!
Take care!
B: I got it!
Thank you!
You too!
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What's its name? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I guess this is so useful for foreigners because you can look up Japanese train lines in English. I |
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Can you understand the explanation when you look at this screen?
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If you can, I think if you downloaded it that would solve the problem? If you |
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Or if you don't wanna download it, I can show you with my app. Or if you don't wan |
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A: As of now, please ride the train leaving at 15:15 heading towards Nakameguro from platform 1, and get off at Ueno. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And then take the train leaving at 15:55 heading towards Koganei from platform 5 of the JR, and that train will take you to Akabane. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: Got it! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What does JR mean by the way? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: A railway company. A: |
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It has many train lines all over Japan. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: I see. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: If you can't catch the 55-minute train, get on the next train heading towards Takasaki on the same platform! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: Mu-huh. |
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So, I take the train leaving at 15:15 heading towards Nakameguro from platform 1, and get off at Ueno and then take the train leaving at 15:55 heading towards Koganei from platform 5 of the JR, or towards Takasaki. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: That is correct. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Also the first train is the Tobu Skytree Line, the next is the JR Utunomiya Line. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But if you fail to catch the 55-minute train, the line will also change from the Utsunomiya line to the Takasaki line. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B:Oh, I got it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Does that app tell you the time of the next train? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Yes, this is it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It seems that the train you take from Ueno leaves every 10 minutes or so. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Why don't you take a picture of this, just in case? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Oh, also again, Japanese trains are of various types, such as local, rapid, section express, limited express, semi-express, and they they stop at different stations depending on the train, so even if they have the same line's name and platform, so make sure that the time and destination in the app match the train you are on. A: Oh, also |
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But, as long as the time and destination of the train you wanna take isn't wrong, it'll work! But, as long as the time and destination of the train you wan |
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Transferring trains at Ueno is a bit difficult, so if you get confused, just ask the station staff or someone looks kind. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: I think you have to exit the ticket gate and walk a bit. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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