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About a movie I watched

Studio Ghibli is known for making movies with beautiful and moving stories, esthetically pretty animation, and captivating soundtracks.
And even though I can consider myself someone who grew up watching their movies, I haven't watched all of them, so I decided to enjoy some of the ones I didn't know, and recently picked "Kiki's Delivery Service" up.
The story follows Kiki, a young witch who, just like all witches, goes out of her home by herself, for a year, to grow as a witch.
I really can't say that was my favorite movie from Hayao Miyazaki, but I still enjoyed it.
The animation and the soundtrack were as beautiful as always, and the story itself was very catchy and interesting, and, of course, there's the cozy and nostalgic atmosphere I feel every time I watch some of these movies.
I must confess that at the beginning of the movie, I really didn't love Kiki, I thought she was very impulsive, childish and quite egoistic, but then I remembered that she is basically a child. She acts like that because she is a child entering her teenage years, and that's how she is supposed to act (I really don't know what I had in my head to think she should behave like an adult). She was also a child that was away from home, and if it wasn't for Jiji she would have been completely alone in a city she didn't know, with people that were not used to witches.
The movie shows Kiki adapting to her new life, seeking independence, facing problems and doing her best to solve them. It also shows her leaving her child self and her childlike manners behind and gaining the maturity proper of a teenager.
Kiki also goes through a self-acceptance journey. Even though is not really that explicit, we can see that in some scenes, she was envious of the way other people dressed because it was prettier than the witch vest; she wanted to be more like those "common people". There's also the scene when she is with that boy who wanted to befriend her and his friends arrive. When she sees them Kiki feels out of place, feeling the difference on their behaviors and dressings, she feels like she doesn't fit in, and ends up getting upset. Of course, that's how I interpreted it, because as I said, none of that it's explicitly stated in the movie, although one can intuit it.
In any case, I adored seeing Kiki embrace her differences, while maturing and becoming more independent and confident. I felt really proud of her and happy for her because she ended up meeting people who liked her and accepted her. Her story really warmed my heart.

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About a movie I watched

Studio Ghibli is known for making movies with beautiful and moving stories, aesthetically prettyleasing animation, and captivating soundtracks.

"aesthetically pleasing" is a more common phrase

And even though I can consider myself as someone who grew up watching their movies, I haven't yet watched all of them, so I decided to enjoy some of the ones I didn't know, and recently picked "Kiki's Delivery Service" up.

The story follows Kiki, a young witch who, just like all witches, goes out of her home by herself, for a year, to grow as a witch.

I really can't say that it was my favorite movie from Hayao Miyazaki, but I still enjoyed it.

The animation and the soundtrack were as beautiful as always, and the story itself was very catchy and interesting, a. And, of course, there's the cozy and nostalgic atmosphere I feel every time I watch some of these movies.

I must confess that at the beginning of the movie, I really didn't love Kiki,. I thought she was very impulsive, childish and quite egoistic, but then I remembered that she iwas basically still a child.

She actsed like that because she iwas a child entering her teenage years, and that's how she iwas supposed to actbehave. (I really don't know what I had in my head to thinky I thought she should behave like an adult).)

She was also a child that was away from home, and if it wasn't for Jiji she, Kiki would have been completely alone in a city she didn't know, with people that were not used to witches.

The movie shows Kikifollowed Kiki as she adaptinged to her new life, seeking independence, facing problems and doing her best to solve them.

It also showsed her leaving her childish self and her childlike manners behind and, gradually gaining the maturity properexpected of a teenager.

Kiki also goeswent through a self-acceptance journey.

Even though it was not really that explicit, we can see that in some scenes, she was envious of the way other peoples dressed because it wastheir clothes were prettier than the witch vest; she wanted to be more like those "common people".

There's also the scene when she iwas with thata boy who wanted to befriend her andjust as his friends arrived.

When she seesaw them, Kiki feelst out of place, feelnoticing the difference oin their behaviors and dressclothings, s. She feelst like she doesidn't fit in, and ends up gettinggot upset.

Of course, that's how I interpreted it, because as I said, none of that it's explicitly stated in the movie, although one can intuit it.

In any case, I adored seeing Kiki embrace her differences, while maturing and becoming more independent and confident.

I felt really proud of her and happy for her because she ended up meeting people who liked her and accepted her.

Her story really warmed my heart.

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Nice writing! I tried to keep the tense consistent, though it may not always be necessary.

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Devine_05

Jan. 27, 2024

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Thank you!! Yeah, that's something I struggle with sometimes, I was really in doubt about using present tense or past tense, but I can see that for that kind of text the past tense fits better.

About a movie I watched

Studio Ghibli is known for making movies with beautiful and moving stories, aesthetically prettyappealing animation, and captivating soundtracks.

And even though I can consider myself someone who grew up watching their movies, I haven't watched all of them, so. So, I decided to enjoy some of the ones I didn't know, and recently picked "Kiki's Delivery Service" up.

The story follows Kiki, a young witch who, just like all witches, goes out of her home by herself, for a year, to grow as a witch.

I really can't say that was my favorite movie from Hayao Miyazaki, but I still enjoyed it.

The animation and the soundtrack were as beautiful as always, and the story itself was very catchy and interesting, a. And, of course, there's the cozy and nostalgic atmosphere I feel every time I watch some of these movies.

I must confess that at the beginning of the movie, I really didn't lovike Kiki,. I thought she was very impulsive, childish and quite egoistic, but then I remembered that she is basically a child.

She acts like that because she is a child entering her teenage years, and that's how she is supposed to act (I really don't know what I hadwas going on in my head to think that she should behave like an adult).

She was also a child that was away from home, and if it wasn't for Jiji she would have been completely alone in a city she didn't know, with people that were not used to witches.

The movie shows Kiki adapting to her new life, seeking independence, facing problems and doing her best to solve them.

It also shows her leaving her child self and her childlike manners behind and gaining the maturity proper of a teenager.

Kiki also goes through a self-acceptance journey.

Even though is not really that explicit, we can see that in some scenes, she was envious of the way other people dressed because it was prettier than the witch vest; she wanted to be more like those "common people".

There's also the scene when she is with that boy who wanted to befriend her and his friends arrive.

When she sees them Kiki feels out of place, f. Feeling the difference obetween their behaviors and way of dressings, she feels like she doesn't fit in, and ends up getting upset.

Of course, that's how I interpreted it, because as I said, none of that it's explicitly stated in the movie, although one can intuit it.

In any case, I adored seeing Kiki embrace her differences, while maturing and becoming more independent and confident.

I felt really proud of her and happy for her because she ended up meeting people who liked her and accepted her.

Her story really warmed my heart.

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Great job summarizing the movie. You wrote very well! :)

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Devine_05

Jan. 27, 2024

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Thank you!! And thank you for the corrections too!

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About a movie I watched

Studio Ghibli is known for making movies with beautiful and moving stories, esthetically pretty animation, and captivating soundtracks.

And even though I can consider myself someone who grew up watching their movies, I haven't watched all of them, so I decided to enjoy some of the ones I didn't know, and recently picked up "Kiki's Delivery Service" up.

Sounds more natural

The story follows Kiki, a young witch who, just like all witches, goes out of her home by herself, for a year, to grow as a witch.

I really can't say that it was my favorite movie from Hayao Miyazaki, but I still enjoyed it.

The animation and the soundtrack were as beautiful as always, and the story itself was very catchy and interesting, and, of course, there's the cozy and nostalgic atmosphere I feel every time I watch some of these movies.

I must confess that at the beginning of the movie, I really didn't love Kiki, I thought she was very impulsive, childish and quite egoistic, but then I remembered that she is basically a child.

She acts like that because she is a child entering her teenage years, and that's how she is supposed to act (I really don't know what I had in my head to think she should behave like an adult).

She was also a child that was away from home, and if it wasn't for Jiji she would have been completely alone in a city she didn't know, with people that were not used to witches.

The movie shows Kiki adapting to her new life, seeking independence, facing problems and doing her best to solve them.

It also shows her leaving her child self and her childlike manners behind and gaining the maturity proper of a teenager.

You can leave "proper" out it sounds a bit old fashioned

Kiki also goes through a self-acceptance journey.

Even though is not really that explicit, we can see that in some scenes, she was envious of the way other people dressed because it was prettier than the witch vest; she wanted to be more like those "common people".

There's also the scene when she is with that boy who wanted to befriend her and his friends arrive.

When she sees them Kiki feels out of place, feeling the difference onf their behaviors and dressingclothing styles, she feels like she doesn't fit in, and ends up getting upset.

Of course, that's how I interpreted it, because as I said, none of that it's explicitly stated in the movie, although one can intuit it.

In any case, I adored seeing Kiki embrace her differences, while maturing and becoming more independent and confident.

I felt really proud of her and happy for her because she ended up meeting people who liked her and accepted her.

Her story really warmed my heart.

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Great writing! I have seen this movie and think it's really sweet.

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Devine_05

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Thank you so much!! I was actually in doubt with some of those, thank you for help me to clear that up. Right! it's indeed very sweet, perfect for relaxing and making one smile.

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The story follows Kiki, a young witch who, just like all witches, goes out of her home by herself, for a year, to grow as a witch.


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I really can't say that was my favorite movie from Hayao Miyazaki, but I still enjoyed it.


I really can't say that it was my favorite movie from Hayao Miyazaki, but I still enjoyed it.

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I really can't say that it was my favorite movie from Hayao Miyazaki, but I still enjoyed it.

The animation and the soundtrack were as beautiful as always, and the story itself was very catchy and interesting, and, of course, there's the cozy and nostalgic atmosphere I feel every time I watch some of these movies.


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The animation and the soundtrack were as beautiful as always, and the story itself was very catchy and interesting, a. And, of course, there's the cozy and nostalgic atmosphere I feel every time I watch some of these movies.

The animation and the soundtrack were as beautiful as always, and the story itself was very catchy and interesting, a. And, of course, there's the cozy and nostalgic atmosphere I feel every time I watch some of these movies.

I must confess that at the beginning of the movie, I really didn't love Kiki, I thought she was very impulsive, childish and quite egoistic, but then I remembered that she is basically a child.


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I must confess that at the beginning of the movie, I really didn't lovike Kiki,. I thought she was very impulsive, childish and quite egoistic, but then I remembered that she is basically a child.

I must confess that at the beginning of the movie, I really didn't love Kiki,. I thought she was very impulsive, childish and quite egoistic, but then I remembered that she iwas basically still a child.

She acts like that because she is a child entering her teenage years, and that's how she is supposed to act (I really don't know what I had in my head to think she should behave like an adult).


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She acts like that because she is a child entering her teenage years, and that's how she is supposed to act (I really don't know what I hadwas going on in my head to think that she should behave like an adult).

She actsed like that because she iwas a child entering her teenage years, and that's how she iwas supposed to actbehave. (I really don't know what I had in my head to thinky I thought she should behave like an adult).)

She was also a child that was away from home, and if it wasn't for Jiji she would have been completely alone in a city she didn't know, with people that were not used to witches.


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She was also a child that was away from home, and if it wasn't for Jiji she, Kiki would have been completely alone in a city she didn't know, with people that were not used to witches.

The movie shows Kiki adapting to her new life, seeking independence, facing problems and doing her best to solve them.


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The movie shows Kikifollowed Kiki as she adaptinged to her new life, seeking independence, facing problems and doing her best to solve them.

It also shows her leaving her child self and her childlike manners behind and gaining the maturity proper of a teenager.


It also shows her leaving her child self and her childlike manners behind and gaining the maturity proper of a teenager.

You can leave "proper" out it sounds a bit old fashioned

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It also showsed her leaving her childish self and her childlike manners behind and, gradually gaining the maturity properexpected of a teenager.

Kiki also goes through a self-acceptance journey.


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Kiki also goeswent through a self-acceptance journey.

Even though is not really that explicit, we can see that in some scenes, she was envious of the way other people dressed because it was prettier than the witch vest; she wanted to be more like those "common people".


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Even though it was not really that explicit, we can see that in some scenes, she was envious of the way other peoples dressed because it wastheir clothes were prettier than the witch vest; she wanted to be more like those "common people".

Studio Ghibli is known for making movies with beautiful and moving stories, esthetically pretty animation, and captivating soundtracks.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Studio Ghibli is known for making movies with beautiful and moving stories, aesthetically prettyappealing animation, and captivating soundtracks.

Studio Ghibli is known for making movies with beautiful and moving stories, aesthetically prettyleasing animation, and captivating soundtracks.

"aesthetically pleasing" is a more common phrase

And even though I can consider myself someone who grew up watching their movies, I haven't watched all of them, so I decided to enjoy some of the ones I didn't know, and recently picked "Kiki's Delivery Service" up.


And even though I can consider myself someone who grew up watching their movies, I haven't watched all of them, so I decided to enjoy some of the ones I didn't know, and recently picked up "Kiki's Delivery Service" up.

Sounds more natural

And even though I can consider myself someone who grew up watching their movies, I haven't watched all of them, so. So, I decided to enjoy some of the ones I didn't know, and recently picked "Kiki's Delivery Service" up.

And even though I can consider myself as someone who grew up watching their movies, I haven't yet watched all of them, so I decided to enjoy some of the ones I didn't know, and recently picked "Kiki's Delivery Service" up.

There's also the scene when she is with that boy who wanted to befriend her and his friends arrive.


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There's also the scene when she iwas with thata boy who wanted to befriend her andjust as his friends arrived.

When she sees them Kiki feels out of place, feeling the difference on their behaviors and dressings, she feels like she doesn't fit in, and ends up getting upset.


When she sees them Kiki feels out of place, feeling the difference onf their behaviors and dressingclothing styles, she feels like she doesn't fit in, and ends up getting upset.

When she sees them Kiki feels out of place, f. Feeling the difference obetween their behaviors and way of dressings, she feels like she doesn't fit in, and ends up getting upset.

When she seesaw them, Kiki feelst out of place, feelnoticing the difference oin their behaviors and dressclothings, s. She feelst like she doesidn't fit in, and ends up gettinggot upset.

Of course, that's how I interpreted it, because as I said, none of that it's explicitly stated in the movie, although one can intuit it.


Of course, that's how I interpreted it, because as I said, none of that it's explicitly stated in the movie, although one can intuit it.

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In any case, I adored seeing Kiki embrace her differences, while maturing and becoming more independent and confident.


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In any case, I adored seeing Kiki embrace her differences, while maturing and becoming more independent and confident.

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I felt really proud of her and happy for her because she ended up meeting people who liked her and accepted her.


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I felt really proud of her and happy for her because she ended up meeting people who liked her and accepted her.

Her story really warmed my heart.


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