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SummerTeaWater

June 9, 2021

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Review My English Practice

I have learned English since fifteen months ago after changing my learning method.

Two years ago, I just played 'Duolingo' app which is a kind of language learning app.

When I watched a video on YouTube, it hit me.

The video was about how to teach kids English and I thought that the method was good for me, too.

Like the guide on the video, I have spoken children's book loudly.

Plus, I try to remember at least one sentence every day.

After 10 months later, I felt confident about English, because I could read English books more easy and I could listen to videos which speaks in English.

Now, I still have problems about writing and speaking in English, but I will do my best to overcome the problems.

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Like the guide on the video, I have spokenread children's' books out loudly.

While this suggestion doesn't preserve the emphasis on how loud it is, the way your sentence reads makes me think that the act of reading books out loud is the important part. I'm also assuming you read more than one book, if I'm not mistaken. That's why I changed it to "books"

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omikami

June 9, 2021

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I agree, since "played" is used more for games.

Review My English Practice

I have been learneding English sincefor fifteen months ago, after changing my learning method.

You can also write: “after I changed my learning method”.

Two years ago, I just played 'Duolingo' app which is a kind of language learning app.

You can also say, “I just used “Duolingo”, which is a language learning app”.

WThen I watched a video on YouTube, and it hit me.

The video was about how to teach kids English to kids” and I thought that the method was good for me, too.

Like the guide otips shown in the video, I have spoken children's book loudly.

Or “Like the guide in the video suggested..”

Plus, I try to remember at least one sentence every day.

After 10 months later, I felt confident about English, because I could read English books more easily and I could listen to videos which speaksthat are in English.

Now, I still have problems aboutin the writing and speaking in Englishparts, but I will do my best to overcome these problems.

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Great job!

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omikami

June 9, 2021

0

Two years ago, I just played 'Duolingo' app which is a kind of language learning app.

I agree, since "played" is used more for games.

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SummerTeaWater

June 10, 2021

402

Thank you all.

I have learned English since fifteen months ago after changing my learning method.


I have been learneding English sincefor fifteen months ago, after changing my learning method.

You can also write: “after I changed my learning method”.

Review My English Practice


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Two years ago, I just played 'Duolingo' app which is a kind of language learning app.


Two years ago, I just played 'Duolingo' app which is a kind of language learning app.

You can also say, “I just used “Duolingo”, which is a language learning app”.

When I watched a video on YouTube, it hit me.


WThen I watched a video on YouTube, and it hit me.

The video was about how to teach kids English and I thought that the method was good for me, too.


The video was about how to teach kids English to kids” and I thought that the method was good for me, too.

Like the guide on the video, I have spoken children's book loudly.


Like the guide otips shown in the video, I have spoken children's book loudly.

Or “Like the guide in the video suggested..”

Like the guide on the video, I have spokenread children's' books out loudly.

While this suggestion doesn't preserve the emphasis on how loud it is, the way your sentence reads makes me think that the act of reading books out loud is the important part. I'm also assuming you read more than one book, if I'm not mistaken. That's why I changed it to "books"

Plus, I try to remember at least one sentence every day.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After 10 months later, I felt confident about English, because I could read English books more easy and I could listen to videos which speaks in English.


After 10 months later, I felt confident about English, because I could read English books more easily and I could listen to videos which speaksthat are in English.

Now, I still have problems about writing and speaking in English, but I will do my best to overcome the problems.


Now, I still have problems aboutin the writing and speaking in Englishparts, but I will do my best to overcome these problems.

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