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Gonzalo1447

Oct. 3, 2024

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today was a routine day, every morning start doing reports in my job, this reports have financial information and some KPI's of the differents team work in my company. Also, I participated in a few mettings, the most important metting was when the team lead told us that I was chosed how the new Costumer master data specialist, this notice is something that make me happy becasue it was a process of almost 4 month were a lot of people participated by different countries with a higth standar of knowledge. After the mittings I continued with the month-end reports until the end of the working day.

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tToday was a routine day, e. Every morning start doing reports in my job, thisI do reports at work, doing with reports havewith financial information and some KPI's of the differents team work in
I also do key performance indicators (KPI) with team members at
my company.

RECOMENDACIÓN: Divida las frases largas en frases más cortas. Acuérdate también de escribir en mayúscula la primera letra de cada frase. / SUGGESTION: Break long sentences into shorter sentences. Also, remember to capitalize the first letter of each sentence.

MY GUESS: Also, I participated in a few metetings,. In the most important metting was when the team lead told us that Ione, I was was chosed hown as the new Costconsumer master data specialist, t. This notice is something that make me happy becasue it was a process of almost 4gladdened me because I worked for four months wereith a lot of people participated byfrom different countries with a higth standards of knowledge.

SUGGESTION: Use a spelling checker.

tToday was a routine day, e. Every morning, I start doing reports infor my job, this. These reports have financial information and some KPI's of the differents team that work in my company.

Also, I participated in a few metetings, t. The most important meteting was when the team lead told us that I was chosed hown as the new Costumer mMaster dData sSpecialist, t. This notice is something that makes me happy becasuse it was a process of almost 4four months where a lot of people participated byfrom different countries with a higth standard of knowledge.

Use periods instead of commas to break up your streams of thought and create complete sentences.

After the miteetings, I continued with the month-end reports until the end of the working day.

Resumeport of the dDay

I'm not sure what you meant by "resume." I'm assuming you meant "report", based on what I've read below.

tToday was a routine day, everylike any other day: this morning, I started doing reports in my job, this. These reports haved financial information and some KPI's of the differents teams work ing at my company.

Also, I participated in a few metetings, t. The most important meetting was when the team leader told us that I was chosed hown to be the new Ccostumer master data specialist, t. This notice is something thaannouncement makde me happy becasuse it was a process of almost 4 month, and there were a lot of people participated byfrom different countries with a higth standard of knowledge that were competing for this position.

After the mitse meetings, I continued with the end-of-the-month-end reports until the end of the working day.

Feedback

I didn't want to change too much because I was having trouble understanding a few of your sentences. Some words did not match with their meanings, which made it harder for me to understand what you wanted to say. If I did accidentally change something that I shouldn't have, then I apologize in advance, and just ignore that change. One thing to note is your use of commas. Some of your commas were used as periods, which unintentionally made your sentences seem like "run-on" sentences, especially the first sentence and the second-to-last one. I would suggest revisiting this concept at some point. I also fixed some of the misspelled words here and there.

In short, keep practicing and keep learning, and you'll see growth not only in your writing but also in your speaking. I believe in you!

tToday was a routine day,. I begin every morning startby doing reports infor my job, this. These reports have financial information and some KPI's of the differents team work in my company.

Also, I participated in a few metetings, t. The most important meteting was when the team lead told us that I was chosed hown as the new Costumer master data specialist, t. ¶
T
his notice is something that makes me happy becasuse it was a process of almost 4 months where a lot of people participated byin different countries with a higth standard of knowledge.

The word "choose" is a weird word in english. In the past tense, it's "chose." As an example, this would be "I chose to walk instead of run." However, whenever it's passive, it's written as "chosen." As an example, this would be "I have been chosen to speak at the event."

After the miteetings, I continued with the month-end reports until the end of the working day.

Feedback

Great job!

Resume of the day


Resumeport of the dDay

I'm not sure what you meant by "resume." I'm assuming you meant "report", based on what I've read below.

today was a routine day, every morning start doing reports in my job, this reports have financial information and some KPI's of the differents team work in my company.


tToday was a routine day,. I begin every morning startby doing reports infor my job, this. These reports have financial information and some KPI's of the differents team work in my company.

tToday was a routine day, everylike any other day: this morning, I started doing reports in my job, this. These reports haved financial information and some KPI's of the differents teams work ing at my company.

tToday was a routine day, e. Every morning, I start doing reports infor my job, this. These reports have financial information and some KPI's of the differents team that work in my company.

tToday was a routine day, e. Every morning start doing reports in my job, thisI do reports at work, doing with reports havewith financial information and some KPI's of the differents team work in
I also do key performance indicators (KPI) with team members at
my company.

RECOMENDACIÓN: Divida las frases largas en frases más cortas. Acuérdate también de escribir en mayúscula la primera letra de cada frase. / SUGGESTION: Break long sentences into shorter sentences. Also, remember to capitalize the first letter of each sentence.

Also, I participated in a few mettings, the most important metting was when the team lead told us that I was chosed how the new Costumer master data specialist, this notice is something that make me happy becasue it was a process of almost 4 month were a lot of people participated by different countries with a higth standar of knowledge.


Also, I participated in a few metetings, t. The most important meteting was when the team lead told us that I was chosed hown as the new Costumer master data specialist, t. ¶
T
his notice is something that makes me happy becasuse it was a process of almost 4 months where a lot of people participated byin different countries with a higth standard of knowledge.

The word "choose" is a weird word in english. In the past tense, it's "chose." As an example, this would be "I chose to walk instead of run." However, whenever it's passive, it's written as "chosen." As an example, this would be "I have been chosen to speak at the event."

Also, I participated in a few metetings, t. The most important meetting was when the team leader told us that I was chosed hown to be the new Ccostumer master data specialist, t. This notice is something thaannouncement makde me happy becasuse it was a process of almost 4 month, and there were a lot of people participated byfrom different countries with a higth standard of knowledge that were competing for this position.

Also, I participated in a few metetings, t. The most important meteting was when the team lead told us that I was chosed hown as the new Costumer mMaster dData sSpecialist, t. This notice is something that makes me happy becasuse it was a process of almost 4four months where a lot of people participated byfrom different countries with a higth standard of knowledge.

Use periods instead of commas to break up your streams of thought and create complete sentences.

MY GUESS: Also, I participated in a few metetings,. In the most important metting was when the team lead told us that Ione, I was was chosed hown as the new Costconsumer master data specialist, t. This notice is something that make me happy becasue it was a process of almost 4gladdened me because I worked for four months wereith a lot of people participated byfrom different countries with a higth standards of knowledge.

SUGGESTION: Use a spelling checker.

After the mittings I continued with the month-end reports until the end of the working day.


After the miteetings, I continued with the month-end reports until the end of the working day.

After the mitse meetings, I continued with the end-of-the-month-end reports until the end of the working day.

After the miteetings, I continued with the month-end reports until the end of the working day.

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