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alexwong2164

July 29, 2021

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Last two weeks I focus on exercises I am happy the results I got.

Also, my knowledge on how to exercises is getting better.

This week because working in night shift.

I don’t want to getting too tire.

So, I decided mainly stay in the library and read some books.

Same experience happened!

After the first day I just want to quit!

But somehow, I manage to keep continue this task.

At the end, I had a major breakthrough on a difficult subject.

I am so happy about that.

Start from tomorrow back to exercise cycle very looking forward.

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Results for this week

LThe last two weeks I focused on exercises, and I am happy with the results I got.

Also, my knowledge on how to exercises is getting better.

Or "how to do exercises" - "to exercise" is a verb, "to do exercises" is verb "to do" plus noun "exercises".

TI don't want to get too tired this week, because I'm working inon the night shift.

This sentence fragment doesn't say anything on its own, so I joined them and rearranged.

So, I decided to mainly stay in the library and read some books.

Same experienceThe same thing happened!

Or "I had the same experience!" I don't think we talk about experiences "happening".

After the first day I just want to quit!

Maybe "I just wanted"? But "want" is okay if it's still hard, if you still have trouble keeping the routine.

But somehow, I manage to keep continuedoing this task.

Again, "managed" if you're talking about specifically what happened yesterday but "I manage" is okay if you want to say this happens every night, that it's a habit now.

"I manage to keep doing" or "I manage to continue". Don't say "keep continue".

At the end, I had a major breakthrough on a difficult subject.

I am so happy about that.

Starting from tomorrow I'm going back to the exercise cycle ver, and I'm really looking forward to it.

This sentence needed a lot of things!

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Glad to hear about your breakthrough :) Good luck with the exercises!

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Last two weeks I focus on exercises I am happy the results I got.


LThe last two weeks I focused on exercises, and I am happy with the results I got.

Also, my knowledge on how to exercises is getting better.


Also, my knowledge on how to exercises is getting better.

Or "how to do exercises" - "to exercise" is a verb, "to do exercises" is verb "to do" plus noun "exercises".

This week because working in night shift.


TI don't want to get too tired this week, because I'm working inon the night shift.

This sentence fragment doesn't say anything on its own, so I joined them and rearranged.

I don’t want to getting too tire.


So, I decided mainly stay in the library and read some books.


So, I decided to mainly stay in the library and read some books.

Same experience happened!


Same experienceThe same thing happened!

Or "I had the same experience!" I don't think we talk about experiences "happening".

After the first day I just want to quit!


After the first day I just want to quit!

Maybe "I just wanted"? But "want" is okay if it's still hard, if you still have trouble keeping the routine.

But somehow, I manage to keep continue this task.


But somehow, I manage to keep continuedoing this task.

Again, "managed" if you're talking about specifically what happened yesterday but "I manage" is okay if you want to say this happens every night, that it's a habit now. "I manage to keep doing" or "I manage to continue". Don't say "keep continue".

At the end, I had a major breakthrough on a difficult subject.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am so happy about that.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Start from tomorrow back to exercise cycle very looking forward.


Starting from tomorrow I'm going back to the exercise cycle ver, and I'm really looking forward to it.

This sentence needed a lot of things!

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