Sept. 3, 2021
Things I do When I Go To a Restaurant
When I go to the restaurant, I usually do like this.
First, I decide a table where I want to sit.
Sometimes a waiter recommends a place.
Then I want to ask a place near a window.
Next, I try to select a meal what I want to eat.
If I go to a restaurant where I go for the first time, I usually order Bibimbap, which is a Korean famous food with mixed with rice, vegetables and red pepper tube.
It is because I can test the taste of a restaurant with ingredients of Bibimbap, specially seasoned vegetables.
After serving the meal, I pick my spoon and start to eat rice and I eat main dishes and side dishes with with chopsticks.
Some restaurants prepare an additional side dish desk where customers can get more side dishes like kimchi, pickled radish, seasoned spinach, and so on.
When I eat out, I usually don’t wait a desert because most of the time, the desert is a coffee which I don’t prefer.
So, these are the things I do when i go to a restaurant.
Things I do When I Go To a Restaurant
When I go to thea restaurant, I usually do like this.
First, I decide on a table where I want to sit.
Sometimes a waiter recommends a place.
Then I want to ask for a place near a window.
"Then" suggests that this happens after the waiter recommends a place, which is awkward.
Next, I try to select a meal wthat I want to eat.
If I'm going to a restaurant where I go for the first time, I usually order Bbibimbap, which is a famous Korean famous food with mixeood with rice, vegetables and red pepper tubpaste.
It is because I can test the taste of a restaurant with the ingredients of Bbibimbap, especially the seasoned vegetables.
After serving the meal is served, I pick up my spoon and start to eat rice, and I eat main dishes and side dishes with with chopsticks.
Some restaurants prepare an additional side dish desk where customers can get more side dishes like kimchi, pickled radish, seasoned spinach, and so on.
When I eat out, I usually don’t waint a dessert because most of the time, the dessert is a coffee, which I don’t preferlike.
If you don't like any coffee, use "which I don't like" with a comma before it. If you don't like just the coffee that is served for dessert, say "the dessert is a coffee that I don't prefer."
So, these are the things I do when i go to a restaurant.
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Nice job! Most of the errors were minor and with connecting, "functional" words.
Sept. 4, 2021
Thank you so much.
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Restaurant |
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When i go to the restaurant |
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At first, Decide a table |
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Sometimes a waiter recommends a place. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Next, i try to select a cousin what i want to eat. |
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If i go to a restaurant very first time, i usually order bibimbap which is mixed with rice, vegetables and red pepper tube. |
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Cooking vegetables is difficult, so I can figure out the restaurant’s level with bibimbap. |
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After serving the meal, i pick my spoon and start to eat rice. |
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Using chapstick, i eat main dishes and side dishes. |
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Some restaurants prepare side dish desk where customers can get more side dishes like kimchi, pickled radish, seasoned spinach , and so on. |
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When I eat out, i usually don’t wait desert.because most of case, the desert is coffee which I don’t prefer. |
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So, these are the things i do when i go to a restaurant |
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Things I do When I Go To a Restaurant This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I go to the restaurant, I usually do like this. When I go to |
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First, I decide a table where I want to sit. First, I decide on a table where I want to sit. |
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Then I want to ask a place near a window.
"Then" suggests that this happens after the waiter recommends a place, which is awkward. |
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Next, I try to select a meal what I want to eat. Next, I try to select a meal |
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If I go to a restaurant where I go for the first time, I usually order Bibimbap, which is a Korean famous food with mixed with rice, vegetables and red pepper tube. If I'm going to a restaurant |
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It is because I can test the taste of a restaurant with ingredients of Bibimbap, specially seasoned vegetables. It is because I can test the taste of a restaurant with the ingredients of |
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After serving the meal, I pick my spoon and start to eat rice and I eat main dishes and side dishes with with chopsticks. After |
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Some restaurants prepare an additional side dish desk where customers can get more side dishes like kimchi, pickled radish, seasoned spinach, and so on. Some restaurants prepare an additional side dish |
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When I eat out, I usually don’t wait a desert because most of the time, the desert is a coffee which I don’t prefer. When I eat out, I usually don’t wa If you don't like any coffee, use "which I don't like" with a comma before it. If you don't like just the coffee that is served for dessert, say "the dessert is a coffee that I don't prefer." |
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So, these are the things I do when i go to a restaurant. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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