Nov. 28, 2022
Respect Others and You Will be Respected
No one would welcome being disrespected. The founder of modern psychology, William James, said the deepest principle in human nature is the desire to be appreciated. Those who are not respected do not feel respected. It’s heartbreaking.
Since we were a child, our parents and teachers would tell us the basic rule of how to respect others, for example, say thank you to the person who gives us a hand. One way to know whether a person is reliable is to observe the way he/she treat service staff. Those people who only show respect to boss or leader but none to others are not worthy to trust.
Respecting others-in which includes paying attention, and being considerate, or regardful, plays an essential component both of interpersonal relationships and of personal identity. We all prefer friends, lovers who are respectful, that is because we want to be respected.
The history of the fight of human rights around the world is the struggle to gain recognition from others. Respect for human beings entails the granting, preserving, and protection of these rights. Without respect, these rights will be missing.
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Respect Others and You Will be Respected
No one would welcome being disrespected.
The founder of modern psychology, William James, said the deepest principle in human nature is the desire to be appreciated.
Those who are not respected do not feel respected.
It’s heartbreaking.
Since we were a children, our parents and teachers would tellach us the basic rules of how to respect others, for example, say thank you to the person who gives us a hand.
"We" is plural so I corrected "child" to "children."
One way to know whether a person is reliable is to observe the way he/she treats service staff.
So true!
Those people who only show respect to their boss or leader but none to others are not worthy tof trust.
Respecting others -in which includes paying attention, - and being considerate, or regarmindful, plays an essential component both ofor interpersonal relationships and of personal identity.
This is profound.
"respecting others" and "being considerate or mindful" are two things so I changed "plays" to "play" for plural verb agreement.
We all prefer friends, and lovers who are respectful, that. This is because we want to be respected.
The history of the fight ofor human rights around the world is the struggle to gain recognition from others.
Respect for human beings entails the granting, preserving, and protection of these rights.
Without respect, these rights will be missingnot exist.
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Nov. 29, 2022
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No one would welcome being disrespected. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The founder of modern psychology, William James, said the deepest principle in human nature is the desire to be appreciated. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Those who are not respected do not feel respected. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It’s heartbreaking. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Since we were a child, our parents and teachers would tell us the basic rule of how to respect others, for example, say thank you to the person who gives us a hand. Since we were "We" is plural so I corrected "child" to "children." |
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One way to know whether a person is reliable is to observe the way he/she treat service staff. One way to know whether a person is reliable is to observe the way he/she treats service staff. So true! |
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Those people who only show respect to boss or leader but none to others are not worthy to trust. Those people who only show respect to their boss or leader but none to others are not worthy |
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Respecting others-in which includes paying attention, and being considerate, or regardful, plays an essential component both of interpersonal relationships and of personal identity. Respecting others - This is profound. "respecting others" and "being considerate or mindful" are two things so I changed "plays" to "play" for plural verb agreement. |
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We all prefer friends, lovers who are respectful, that is because we want to be respected. We all prefer friends |
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The history of the fight of human rights around the world is the struggle to gain recognition from others. The history of the fight |
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Respect for human beings entails the granting, preserving, and protection of these rights. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Without respect, these rights will be missing. Without respect, these rights will |
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