Jan. 1, 2022
Resolution of 2022
Today is the first day of 2022. I want to make some New Year's resolutions.
I hope my mom can stay healthy. I really worry about her health because she is over ninety years old, and her health is in a bad situation.
I hope my family members can stay healthy. My wife is not in a good body condition and she needs to take medicine in her daily life.
Of course, I hope I can stay healthy, as well as speak good English by the end of this year. Although there is no big deal with my health, I feel my medical condition is not as good as when I was young, so I should exercise more.
I also hope everybody can stay healthy and work hard to have a happy life.
Health is the foundation for everyone, so I only hope people can stay healthy because you can have everything if you have a healthy body.
To summarize, I hope 2022 could become a great chapter for everyone in their entire life.
I want to make some New Year's resolutions.
New Year’s resolutions are normally goals about what you want to do this year. Hoping that your family will be healthy is more of a wish than a resolution, because it’s not really something you can control. A resolution is more like “I will exercise more” or “I will make language learning a priority.”
Jan. 4, 2022
I want to make some New Year's resolutions.
Yes, you are right. It’s very difficult to learn a second language.
Resolution of 2022
Today is the first day of 2022.
I want to make some New Year's resolutions.
I hope my mom can stay healthy.
I really worry about her health because she is over ninety years old, and her health is in a bad situacondition.
I hope my family members can stay healthy.
My wife is not in a good's health is also not in body condition and she needs to take medicine in her daily lifedaily.
I added "also" because it is a similar topic you have already mentioned before.
Of course, I hope I can stay healthy, as well as speak good English by the end of this year.
Although there is no big deal with my health, I feel my medical condition is not as good as when I was young, so I should exercise more.
I also hope everybody can stay healthy and work hard to have a happy life.
Health is the foundation for everyone, so I only hope people can stay healthy because you can have everything if you have a healthy body.
To summarize, I hope 2022 couldan become a great chapter for everyone in their entire life.
"I hope ... can" and "I hope ... will" are fine. We don't use "could" or "would" here.
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Very well-written. I hope you and your family stay healthy and happy this year.
Jan. 1, 2022
Thank you very much for your corrections and your best wishes. All the best wishes to you too.
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Resolution of 2022 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today is the first day of 2022. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I want to make some New Year's resolutions. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I want to make some New Year's resolutions. New Year’s resolutions are normally goals about what you want to do this year. Hoping that your family will be healthy is more of a wish than a resolution, because it’s not really something you can control. A resolution is more like “I will exercise more” or “I will make language learning a priority.” |
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I hope my mom can stay healthy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I really worry about her health because she is over ninety years old, and her health is in a bad situation. I really worry about her health because she is over ninety years old, and her health is in |
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I hope my family members can stay healthy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My wife is not in a good body condition and she needs to take medicine in her daily life. My wife I added "also" because it is a similar topic you have already mentioned before. |
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Of course, I hope I can stay healthy, as well as speak good English by the end of this year. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Although there is no big deal with my health, I feel my medical condition is not as good as when I was young, so I should exercise more. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I also hope everybody can stay healthy and work hard to have a happy life. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Health is the foundation for everyone, so I only hope people can stay healthy because you can have everything if you have a healthy body. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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To summarize, I hope 2022 could become a great chapter for everyone in their entire life. To summarize, I hope 2022 c "I hope ... can" and "I hope ... will" are fine. We don't use "could" or "would" here. |
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