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nambatsuyoshi

Aug. 6, 2021

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Reservation for Vaccination

Reservation for vaccination in Hirakata City starts today. Finally, I made the first reservation. Since the vaccine is not centrally distributed to urban areas, the infection cannot be stopped.
By the way, I wrote that the battery of my smartphone didn't last as before after updating my smartphone. I initialized my smartphone today. It didn't take a long time, and it was restored.


今日、枚方市のワクチン接種の予約が始まりました。やっと1回目の予約ができました。都市部にワクチンを集中分配しないから、感染が収まるわけがないです。
ところで、一昨日、スマホをアップデートしたら以前のように電池が持たなくなった、と書きました。今日、初期化しました。それほど時間はかからずに元通りにできました。

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Reservation for Vaccination

Reservations for vaccination in Hirakata City starts today.

or you could say Reservation for vaccinations in Hirakata City starts today. This second sentence has a nuance of a single reservation for multiple vaccines, so I think the first sentence sounds more natural.

Finally, II was finally able to madke one for the first reservationdose.

Since the vaccine is not centrally distributed to urban areas, the infection cannotspread of the virus cannot possibly be stopped.

Added "possibly", since you had わけ in your sentence.

By the way, I wrote earlier that the battery of my smartphone didoesn't last as beforelong after updating my smartphone.

I initializeddid a factory reset on my smartphone today.

Factory reset is the term we use specifically for スマホの初期化

It didn't take a longtoo much time, and it was restoredback to normal.

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nambatsuyoshi

Aug. 6, 2021

4

Thank you!

Reservation for Vaccination


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Reservation for vaccination in Hirakata City starts today.


Reservations for vaccination in Hirakata City starts today.

or you could say Reservation for vaccinations in Hirakata City starts today. This second sentence has a nuance of a single reservation for multiple vaccines, so I think the first sentence sounds more natural.

Finally, I made the first reservation.


Finally, II was finally able to madke one for the first reservationdose.

Since the vaccine is not centrally distributed to urban areas, the infection cannot be stopped.


Since the vaccine is not centrally distributed to urban areas, the infection cannotspread of the virus cannot possibly be stopped.

Added "possibly", since you had わけ in your sentence.

By the way, I wrote that the battery of my smartphone didn't last as before after updating my smartphone.


By the way, I wrote earlier that the battery of my smartphone didoesn't last as beforelong after updating my smartphone.

I initialized my smartphone today.


I initializeddid a factory reset on my smartphone today.

Factory reset is the term we use specifically for スマホの初期化

It didn't take a long time, and it was restored.


It didn't take a longtoo much time, and it was restoredback to normal.

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