March 1, 2024
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1. Since this is my first post, I'm a bit nervous.
2. Today, I saw a long line in front of MacDonald, but I didn't know why.
3. I found out that the line was for buying a kid's meal comes with a toy.
4. The toy has an added value, so it is being resold online.
1. これは最初の投稿だから、緊張している。
2. 今日はマクドナルドの前で、長い行列をみたが、なぜだかわからなかった。
3. 列は、おもちゃつきの子供用のミールを買うためだったことがわかった。
4. おもちゃは、付加価値がついているので、ネットで転売されている。
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Since this is my first post, I'm a bit nervous.
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Today, I saw a long line in front of MacDonald, but I didn't know whyat it was for.
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I found out that the line was for buying a kid's meal that comes with a toy.
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The toy has an added value, so it is being resoldpeople are reselling it online.
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Very good. Good luck on your future posts!
Since this is my first post, I'm a bit nervous.
Today, I saw a long line in front of MacDonald, but I didn't know whyat for.
I found out that the line was for buying a kid's meal that comes with a toy.
The toy has an added value, so it is being resold online.
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Great first post :)
March 2, 2024
Thank you Sandbar for your correction and nice to meet you. I checked your post. It seems that you have already received enough correction.
Resale 転売
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Since this is my first post, I'm a bit nervous.
Today, I saw a long line in front of MacDonalds, but I didn't know why.
3.
I found out that the line was for buying a kid's meal comes with a toy.
4.
The toy has an added value, so it is being resold online.
March 1, 2024
Thank you CherryatCherryavecCHERR for your correction.
March 4, 2024
Thank you for your kind comment
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Since this is my first post, I'm a bit nervous.
2.
Today, I saw a long line in front of MacDonald's, but I didn't know whyat the cause of it was.
if you don't explain, it sounds like you're saying you didn't know why you saw the line (not why the line was there).
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I found out that the line was for buying a kid's meal comes with a toy.
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The toy has an added value, so it is being resold online.
The above sentence is fine, but "so people are reselling it online" sounds a bit more natural.
March 1, 2024
Thank you catherinethegreat for your correction. The people wanted to buy 星のカービィ's toy.
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