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Actually, I have worked in Heavy industries in Korea. Even if I’m bad at English, I would like to be good at English. Despite less time I have, I have tried to have studied everyday by watching and listening Netflix American drama Suits and currently getting 1 by 1 class every Sunday. However it keeps 1 year, I think I faced the limit of improving English speaking. I’m stressed nowadays due to bad English. So how can I improve my English skill more efficiently. If you see this, please let me know through the below reply function.
BI want to be good at English
I think a more complete title works better here.
Actually, I have worked in Heavyseveral industries in Korea.
Starting a piece of writing with "actually" is possible but I would advise against it until you get a better feel for it's nuance.
I'm not sure if this is what you meant here.
Even ifthough I’m bad at English, I would like to be good at Englishimprove.
Improve = get better at something
Despite the littless time I have, I have tried to have studiedy everyday by watching and listeningthe Netflix American drama, Suits and. I'm also currently getting 1 by 1taking one-on-one classes every Sunday.
- "Watching" already implies listening here, so no need to explicitly state both.
- Breaking it into two sentences makes it easier to read (and also easier to write).
However it keeps 1's already been a year, I think I facedhit the limit of improving my English speaking skills.
Just rearranged slightly for more natural phrasing.
I’m stressed nowadays due to badeing bad at English.
So how can I improve my English skills more efficiently.?
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Even though there are some small grammatical mistakes, your points are still clear. Great job!
I think you're on the right track. Is listening to everyday conversation already easy for you? Suits contains some high level vocabulary and legal terminology that could be a bit difficult if you can't yet understand everyday conversation.
Choosing a show with more everyday language (eg. Friends), might be a better start. However, if you're very interested in Suits then that can totally work too.
Just try to keep in mind that this process takes a long time and it's hard to notice your progress. If you keep putting in the time, you will get better for sure. What helps me is tracking the hours that I spend watching shows, listening to podcasts, and reading in my target language. I use that as a proxy for my actual progress since it is easier to keep track of.
Good luck!
Actually, I have worked in Hheavy industries in Korea.
Is your job "Heavy Equipment Operator" or "Heavy Duty Mechanic" maybe? It would sound more natural to say "I'm a (job) in Korea." or "I work as a (job) in Korea."
And we start sentences with 'actually' when we're presenting an opposite opinion/fact or something surprising to a conversation partner. So it feels out of place here.
Even ifthough I’m bad at English, I would like to be good at English.
'Even if X' = X is just a possibility
'Even though X' = X is real fact or situation
And you could change this: be good -> 'get better' (~향상시키고 싶어)
Despite the littless time I have, I have tried to have studiedy every day by watching and listening to the Netflix American drama "Suits", and I'm currently getting 1 by 1 classbeing tutored every Sunday.
"the little time" = 내가 가진 작은 시간
"every day" = 매일, "everyday" = "일상적인"
"being tutored" = 1:1 수업; 과외를 받기
However it keeps 1after a year, I think I f've reached thea limit ofin improving my English speaking.
after a year = sounds more natural
'reach a/the/my limit in ~' is a more natural expression
I’m stressed nowadays due to my bad English.
So how can I improve my English skill more efficiently.?
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You can try picking a favorite video creator and shadowing their videos. That means that instead of just listening and watching, you pick one section of video (only a thirty seconds or a minute long when you begin), and you try to perfectly remember what they say and how they pronounce the words. Then you record yourself saying it, and compare your version with theirs. Keep practicing with the same clip, over and over, until you get better. Then pick a new clip. And the best way to learn a language is to find a friend who speaks that language and have phone calls or play games with them. Just studying grammar and vocabulary won't train your brain to use it.
Despite having less time I have, I have tried to have studied everyday by watching and listening to the Netflix American drama series "Suits" and currently getting 1 byon 1 claslessons every Sunday.
"lesson" is slightly more appropriate than "class" because class typically involves a group of students.
However it keeps 1 year, I think I faced the limit of improvingmy level of English has stayed the same after one way, I think I hit a limit when it comes to my English speaking skills.
I'm not quite sure what you meant in the first part of the sentence.
I’m stressed nowathese days due to my bad English.
"these days" sounds slightly more appropriate to me as a native speaker, though I cannot explain why. Maybe someone else can chime in.
So how can I improve my English skills more efficiently.?
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Continuing to write these texts sound like a good way to continue to improve. I would also suggest more frequent lessons if possible.
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Be good at English
I think a more complete title works better here. |
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Actually, I have worked in Heavy industries in Korea.
Is your job "Heavy Equipment Operator" or "Heavy Duty Mechanic" maybe? It would sound more natural to say "I'm a (job) in Korea." or "I work as a (job) in Korea." And we start sentences with 'actually' when we're presenting an opposite opinion/fact or something surprising to a conversation partner. So it feels out of place here.
Starting a piece of writing with "actually" is possible but I would advise against it until you get a better feel for it's nuance. I'm not sure if this is what you meant here. |
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Even if I’m bad at English, I would like to be good at English. Even 'Even if X' = X is just a possibility 'Even though X' = X is real fact or situation And you could change this: be good -> 'get better' (~향상시키고 싶어) Even Improve = get better at something |
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Despite less time I have, I have tried to have studied everyday by watching and listening Netflix American drama Suits and currently getting 1 by 1 class every Sunday. Despite having less time "lesson" is slightly more appropriate than "class" because class typically involves a group of students. Despite the little "the little time" = 내가 가진 작은 시간 "every day" = 매일, "everyday" = "일상적인" "being tutored" = 1:1 수업; 과외를 받기 Despite the little - "Watching" already implies listening here, so no need to explicitly state both. - Breaking it into two sentences makes it easier to read (and also easier to write). |
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