April 30, 2022
Report: how to improve our school
Introduction
The purpose of this report is to enumerate some improvements that could be carry them out in the outskirts of our school.
Main upgrades
The two principal improvements should be executed are:
- Alternative sports equipment. The school already has popular's sports facilities as basketball and football fields. But, I think it's important giving to the students the opportunity to practice other less popular sports such as tennis, volleyball, baseball...
- Green areas. In the school we don't have any natural space to spare. The placement of a park near the school would to be a good way to disconnect during the classes breaks.
Other improvements
Although the school neighbourhood is quite safe, sometimes there are fights with students from nearby schools. Hire security personnel could help to reduce these awkward situations.
Last but not least, it's very usual to see traffic jams in the first and the last classes times. I should recommend to set up parking spaces in the surroundings or increase the scholar buses number.
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May 21, 2022
I got a little late, but thank you for the help
Report: hHow to improve our school
Introduction
The purpose of this report is to enumerate some improvements that could be carry themied out in the outskirtsexterior of our school.
Main upgrades
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- Alternative sports equipment.
The school already has facilities for popular's sports facilities aslike basketball courts and football fields.
But, I think it's important giving toto give the students the opportunity to practice other, less popular, sports such as tennis, volleyball, baseball...
- Green areas.
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Other improvements
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Hireing security personnel could help to reduce these awkward situations.
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I shwould recommend to setting up parking spaces in the surrounding areas or increase the number of schoolar buses number.
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The school already has popular's sports facilities as basketball and football fields. The school already has facilities for popular The school already has facilities for popular |
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But, I think it's important giving to the students the opportunity to practice other less popular sports such as tennis, volleyball, baseball... But, I think it's important But, I think it's important |
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Although the school neighbourhood is quite safe, sometimes there are fights with students from nearby schools. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Although the school neighbourhood is quite safe, sometimes there are fights |
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Hire security personnel could help to reduce these awkward situations. Hir Hir |
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Last but not least, it's very usual to see traffic jams in the first and the last classes times. Last but not least, it's very
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