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EdoBona11

Aug. 19, 2025

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Reply to a casual letter.

Hi Ben,

Thank you for your email. Your photos are great, you and your family are beautiful. Yesterday I sent you two photos.

In the first photo, I’m the tall one, because my parents aren’t very tall, I’m blonde and thin. Between me and my mum there is my father, he is short, slim and with brown hair. My mum is short, slim and with blonde hair. And the another one is my sister, she is short and thin, she is ten.

When I were twelve, I was short and very thin, I was very extrovert however today I am very introvert.

Best wishes.

Good bye

Ciao Ben,

Grazie per la tua email. Le tue foto sono fantastiche, tu e la tua famiglia siete bellissimi. Ieri ti ho mandato due foto.

Nella prima foto sono io quella alta, perché i miei genitori non sono molto alti, sono bionda e magra. Tra me e mia madre c'è mio padre, basso, magro e con i capelli castani. Mia madre è bassa, magra e con i capelli biondi. E l'altra è mia sorella, bassa e magra, ha dieci anni.

Quando avevo dodici anni ero basso e molto magro, ero molto estroverso, mentre oggi sono molto introverso.

Auguri.

Arrivederci

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Reply to a cCasual lLetter.

Hi Ben, Thank you for your email.

Your photos are great, y. You and your family are beautiful.

Yesterday, I sent you two photos.

In the first photo, I’m the tall one, because m who is thin and blonde. My parents aren’t very tall, I’m blonde and thin.

Between me and my mum, there is my father, h. He is short, slim and with brown hair.

My mum is short, and slim and with blonde hair.

And tThe another one is my sister, s. She is short and thin. Right now, she is ten years old.

When I wereas twelve, I was short and very thin,. I was very extrovert hed. However today, I am very introverted nowadays.

Best wishes.

Good bye!

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Hi Ben,

T thank you for your email.

Your photos are great, you and your family are have a beautiful family.

Yesterday I sent you two photos., I hope that you've received them.

"Yesterday I sent you two photos." sounds quite rough.

In the first photo, I’m the tall one, because my parents aren’t very tall, I’m blondethere are three people; I’m the tall, thin and blonde one. On the other hand, my parents are short and thinslim.

'Because' makes no logical sense in this sentence. Use 'because' to explain why x=y, e.g. (The door is blue because...)

Between me and my mum therand me is my father, — he is short, and slim and with brown hair.

Search "em dash" to learn how to use the syntax '—'.

My mum is short, slim and withhas blonde hair.

And the anothThe last per sone is my sister, she is short and thin, she is ten.

When I wereas twelve, I was short and very thin,. I was very extrovert however todayed, but now I am very introverted.

Best wishes.,¶

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Good bye

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I'm certain whoever you are sending this to is very appreciative.

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kpharrison

Aug. 19, 2025

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Small Edit:

"Hi Ben,

Thank you for your email"

What you've written above is unquestionably correct, but the format in the editing menu was bizarre and confused me, my apologies.

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EdoBona11

Aug. 19, 2025

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Thank you

My mum is short, slim and with blonde hair.

My mum is short, slim and withhas blonde hair.

My mum is short, and slim and with blonde hair.

And the another one is my sister, she is short and thin, she is ten.

And the anothThe last per sone is my sister, she is short and thin, she is ten.

And tThe another one is my sister, s. She is short and thin. Right now, she is ten years old.

When I were twelve, I was short and very thin, I was very extrovert however today I am very introvert.

When I wereas twelve, I was short and very thin,. I was very extrovert however todayed, but now I am very introverted.

When I wereas twelve, I was short and very thin,. I was very extrovert hed. However today, I am very introverted nowadays.

Best wishes.

Best wishes.,¶

[Insert your Name Here]

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Good bye

Good bye!

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Reply to a cCasual lLetter.

Hi Ben, Thank you for your email.

Hi Ben,

T thank you for your email.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Your photos are great, you and your family are beautiful.

Your photos are great, you and your family are have a beautiful family.

Your photos are great, y. You and your family are beautiful.

Yesterday I sent you two photos.

Yesterday I sent you two photos., I hope that you've received them.

"Yesterday I sent you two photos." sounds quite rough.

Yesterday, I sent you two photos.

In the first photo, I’m the tall one, because my parents aren’t very tall, I’m blonde and thin.

In the first photo, I’m the tall one, because my parents aren’t very tall, I’m blondethere are three people; I’m the tall, thin and blonde one. On the other hand, my parents are short and thinslim.

'Because' makes no logical sense in this sentence. Use 'because' to explain why x=y, e.g. (The door is blue because...)

In the first photo, I’m the tall one, because m who is thin and blonde. My parents aren’t very tall, I’m blonde and thin.

Between me and my mum there is my father, he is short, slim and with brown hair.

Between me and my mum therand me is my father, — he is short, and slim and with brown hair.

Search "em dash" to learn how to use the syntax '—'.

Between me and my mum, there is my father, h. He is short, slim and with brown hair.

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