March 21, 2024
Repairing a necklace
I repaired a necklace by myself recently.
It's made of pearls. Even the pearls are not perfect, but I like them very much.
A few days ago, I found it's a little broken. I couldn't find a store to fix it, so I searched for methods to repair it online.
Luckily, a professional on Bilibili made a detailed video, and I found it.
I followed the instructions in the video step by step and re-strung the pearls.
I'm so happy to have my necklace back.
修项链
最近我自己修了一条项链。
它由珍珠做成，虽不完美，但我很喜欢。
几天前，我发现它有点儿坏了。找不到地方修理，于是我上网找了修复的方法。
幸好有位专业人士在bilibili上发了个非常详细的视频，还让我找到了。
一步一步按照视频里的说明，我重新串好了珍珠。
项链归位，太开心啦！
Repairing a necklace
I repaired a necklace by myself recently.
It's made of pearls.
Even though the pearls are not perfect, but I like them very much.
A few days ago, I found it'that it was a little broken.
I couldn't find a store to fix it, so I searched for methods to repair it online.
Luckily, a professional on Bilibili made a detailed video, and I found it.
I followed the instructions in the video step by step and re-strung the pearls.
I'm so happy to have my necklace back.
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Awesome!
March 22, 2024
Yeah~
Thank you for your corrections!
I repaired a necklace by myself recently.
It's made of pearls.SUGGESTION: Combine the previous 2 sentences into 1 sentence like this - "I repaired a pearl necklace by myself recently."
Even the pearls are not perfect, but I like them very much.
SUGGESTION: Specify *how* the pearls were imperfect. Were their colors uneven? Were their sizes uneven? In what way were there "imperfect." OPTION A: Even though their colors were uneven, I them them very much. OPTION B: Even though their sizes were slightly uneven, I like them very much.
MY GUESS: A few days ago, I found it'one of the pearls was a little brokenchipped.
Perhaps "chipped" is a better word choice than "broken."
I couldn't find a store to fix it, so I searched for methods to repair it online.
Luckily, a professional on Bilibili made a detailed video, and I found how to repair it.
I followed the instructions in the video step by step and re-strung the pearls.
I'm so happy to have my necklace back.
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Glad that you were able to repair your necklace!
March 22, 2024
Thank you so much!
Repairing a nNecklace
I repaired a necklace by myself recently.
It's made of pearls.
Even though the pearls are not perfect, but I like ithem very much.
A few days ago, I found it's a littlenoticed it was broken.
I couldn't find a store to fix it, so I searched online for methods to repair it online.
Luckily, a professional on Bilibili made a detailed video, and I found itI found a detailed video posted by a professional on Bilibili.
I followed the step by step instructions in the video step by step and re-strung the pearls.
I'm so happy to have my necklace back.!
March 22, 2024
Thank you so much!
Repairing a nNecklace
I repaired a necklace by myself recently.
It's made of pearls.
Even tThe pearls are not perfect, but I like them very much.
another alternative:
Even though the pearls are not perfect, I like them very much.
A few days ago, I [found it'| noticed] it was a little broken.
I couldn't find a store to fix it, so I searched for methods to repair it online.
Luckily, a professional on Bilibili (had) made a detailed video, and I found it.
I followed the instructions in the video step by step and re-strung the pearls.
I'm so happy to have my necklace back.
March 22, 2024
Thank you for your corrections!
Repairing a necklace
I repaired a necklace by myself recently.
It's made of pearls.
Even though the pearls are not perfect, but II still like ithem very much.
'it' refers to the necklace
AHowever ,a few days ago, I found it's a littleit broken.
since I couldn't find a store to fix it, so I searched for methods to repair it online.
better to say 'I looked up different repair methods online'
Luckily, a professional on Bilibili made a detailed video, and I found itI found a detailed video made by a professional on Bilibili .
I followed theeach instructions in the video step by step and re-strung the pearls one by one.
I'm so happy to have my necklace back.
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👋
March 21, 2024
Thank you so much!
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