Dec. 9, 2022
The bookstore in the station building has reopened.
There was a section with several shops such as restaurants and daily goods stores, which were closed for about half a year for renovation.
After they reopened, the shops changed and the location was moved.
The location of the bookstore has changed, and the sales floor area has shrunk to about a third.
There was a magazine I wanted, so I looked for it, but it wasn't there.
The magazine used to be for sale, but they may have stopped putting it there because the sales floor space has become smaller.
It was sad.
駅の本屋さんがリニューアルオープンしました。
レストランや日用品店などいくつかの店が入った区画があり、改装のため半年ほど休みになっていました。
リニューアル後は、店が入れ替わったり、位置が移動したりしました。
本屋さんは、場所が変わって、売り場面積が3分の1くらいに小さくなってました。
ほしい雑誌があったので、探したのですが、置いてありませんでした。
以前は取り扱っていた雑誌だったのですが、売り場面積が小さくなったので、扱わなくなったのかもしれません。残念です。
Reopening
"Reopen" is a verb. Nouns are used more often in titles.
The bookstore inat the train station building has reopened.
There was a section with several shops such as restaurants and daily goods stores, which were closed for about half a year for renovation.
AfterBefore they reopened, the shops changed and the location was movedd been moved to different locations.
The location of the bookstore has changed, and the sales floor area has shrunk to about a third.
There was a magazine I wanted, so I looked for it, but it wasn't there.
The magazine used to be for sale, but they may have stopped pdistributting it there because the sales floor space has become smaller.
It was sad.
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残念ですね。よく書けています。
Reopen Reopening "Reopen" is a verb. Nouns are used more often in titles. |
The bookstore in the station building has reopened. The bookstore |
There was a section with several shops such as restaurants and daily goods stores, which were closed for about half a year for renovation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
After they reopened, the shops changed and the location was moved.
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The location of the bookstore has changed, and the sales floor area has shrunk to about a third. The location of the bookstore |
There was a magazine I wanted, so I looked for it, but it wasn't there. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
The magazine used to be for sale, but they may have stopped putting it there because the sales floor space has become smaller. The magazine used to be for sale, but they may have stopped |
It was sad. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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