yesterday
Renovation Day 7
The worker came early to finish his work. I opened the door for him and joined morning meeting from home. I let him know some problems that I found, and as same as yesterday, I left my key to him and headed to the office.
In the evening, when I was home, everything looked very nice. A falling off tile was on its place and all tile gaps were filled, white and shiny. The dishwasher is aligned now, even though it doesn't fit perfectly.
He left a note that he will replace the chipped cabinet door to the new one. Also he noticed us the next step is caulking. Everything went smoothly and I was happy with that. Now I can give them 4.5 stars so far. Lol.
I opened the door for him and joined my morning meeting from home.
It is a specific meeting that you attend.
I let him know some problems that I found, and asthe same as yesterday, I left him my key to him and headed to the office.
A falling off tiletile that had been falling off / that fell off was oin its place, and all tile gaps were filled, white and shiny.
He left a note that he will replace the chipped cabinet door to thewith a new one.
Also he noticed uslet us know the next step is caulking.
You could also use the future tense here "will be caulking"
Feedback
Overall, good! Just a few minor corrections for small words. Verb tenses are tricky because the narration is about what the worker and you did, but the effect is what you are seeing now. I think there could be some improvement, but that may just be my opinion.
yesterday
Thank you, Liag! I will take a look some grammar rule about it.
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Renovation Day 7 |
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The worker came early to finish his work. |
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I opened the door for him and joined morning meeting from home. I opened the door for him and joined my morning meeting from home. It is a specific meeting that you attend. |
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I let him know some problems that I found, and as same as yesterday, I left my key to him and headed to the office. I let him know some problems that I found, and |
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In the evening, when I was home, everything looked very nice. |
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A falling off tile was on its place and all tile gaps were filled, white and shiny. A |
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The dishwasher is aligned now, even though it doesn't fit perfectly. |
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He left a note that he will replace the chipped cabinet door to the new one. He left a note that he will replace the chipped cabinet door |
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Also he noticed us the next step is caulking. Also he You could also use the future tense here "will be caulking" |
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Lol. |
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Everything went smoothly and I was happy with that. |
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Now I can give them 4.5 stars so far. |
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