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Renovation Day 3
Today's worker came to my house around 9 am. He brought many tools for today.
After he arrived, the assembled cabinets started to find their right places. (It was super noisy, though! I couldn't focus on my work at all. I know he had to do it, but it was really noisy, and I was sorry for my neighbours.) The bottom cabinets were quickly done, but the upper cabinets weren't because of the ceiling.
It turned out our unit ceiling isn't flat; it's very slightly bent and sloped. As I had written before, this building is old(but not very old; it's almost the average age of the buildings in this city), so it was not surprising to me.
Now the problem is how to set the cabinets on the wall properly, even though we have this crooked surface. He struggled to find a better solution, and he explained to me that he would make the cabinets lower from the current position to avoid their doors scratching the ceiling when we open them.
As you imagine, it would be a big revision, so he just gave it up for today and went out.
On the other side, there was another problem.
I got an email from the contractor company. They said they will arrange for an electrician next week, and no idea about the plumber yet, so the other manager will call me back later. WHAT? Do you say that I have to stay without a kitchen over the weekend and for a week more? We've already spent a lot of money on taking out food!
They confirmed the construction will be finished in a week. And they changed their words. This is not the first time.
Originally, they were supposed to start my project at the end of November. I gave them enough time to set the date for my unit, so I had already waited for 2 months by then. But a week before the original date, when I checked the schedule, they just said the date had been delayed. I was upset, but I didn't show my emotions to them. Just let they know my other appliances would deliver on the original date.
I was so disappointed after I got the email today, so I sent an email with my concern and complaint(I got help from AI); I am not asking you to rush the project, but we wish you would let us know a clear schedule.
Let's see how it goes...
Today's, the worker came to my house around 9 am.
He brought many tools for today.
After he arrived, the assembled the cabinets started to find their right places.
I couldn't focus on my work at all.
I know that he had to do it, but it was really noisy, and I was sorry for my neighbours.).
The bottom cabinets were done quickly done, but the upper cabinets weren't done because of the ceiling.
It turned out that our unit ceiling isn't flat; it's bent very slightly bent and sloped.
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Thanks for your feedback, Hank123!
It’s easy to understand what I missed.
I have a question: the worker who came here yesterday was a new person. We met first time yesterday. Can I use ‘the’ in this case too? Or should I describe more like now and use THE from the next sentences?
Today's worker came to my house around 9 am.
We tend to keep "pm" and "am" right next to the number without a space.
He brought many tools fto do the work today.
(It was super noisy, though!
I couldn't focus on my work at all.
I know he had to do it, but it was really noisy, and I was. I also felt sorry for my neighbours.)
The bottom cabinets were quickly done, but the upper cabinets weren't finished because of the ceiling.
It turned out our unit ceiling isn't flat; it's very slightly bent and sloped.
As I had written before, this building is old(but not very old; so it was not surprising to me. However this house is not especially old since it's almost the average age of the buildings in this city), so it was not surprising to me.
I would separate the two thoughts here in writing. In a conversation these two topics would be overlapping like this.
As you imagine, it would be a big revision, so he just gave it up for today. So for today he gave up and went out.
You could say "gave up" but technically he decided to stop work for the day which is a more professional phrasing of it.
On the other sidehand, there was another problem.
If you say "side" and you're referring to renovations it sounds like the other side of your kitchen.
I got another email from the contractor company.
They said they will arrange for an electrician next week, but hand no idea about the plumber yet, so the other manager will call me back later.
"but" is used for contrast.
I thought: WHAT?!
Do you saymean that I have to stay without a kitchen over the weekend and for a week morelonger?
We've already spent a lot of money on taking out foode-out!
They had first confirmed the construction will be finished in a week.
AndBut now they changed their wordpromises.
I gave them enough time to set the date for my unit, so I had already waited for 2 months by then.
But a week before the original date, when I checked the schedule, they just said the date had been delayed.
I was upset, but I didn't show my emotions to them.
JThey just let theyme know my other appliances would deliver on the original date.
I was so disappointed after I got the email today, so I sent an email with my concern and complaint(. I got help from AI); to write it.
I am not asking you to rush the project, but we wish you would let us know a clear and definitive schedule.
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I understand your pain, contractors change their promises all the time!
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Thanks for your feedback!
One thing I can do the self correct after I read your correction; I just let them know…because every cabinet items and new kitchen appliances were ordered by me! :)
I am so sorry to hear you empathize my story 😔 It must be not common!
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Your feedback sentences are very smooth to read. I will try to connect sentences like how you made next time. It was a long journal, I appreciate your help!
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Today's worker came to my house around 9 am. Today's worker came to my house around 9 We tend to keep "pm" and "am" right next to the number without a space. Today |
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He brought many tools for today. He brought many tools He brought many tools |
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After he arrived, the assembled cabinets started to find their right places. After he arrived, |
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(It was super noisy, though! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I couldn't focus on my work at all. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I couldn't focus on my work at all. |
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The bottom cabinets were quickly done, but the upper cabinets weren't because of the ceiling. The bottom cabinets were quickly done, but the upper cabinets weren't finished because of the ceiling. The bottom cabinets were done quickly |
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It turned out our unit ceiling isn't flat; it's very slightly bent and sloped. It turned out our unit ceiling isn't flat; it's very slightly bent and sloped. It turned out that our unit ceiling isn't flat; it's bent very slightly |
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As I had written before, this building is old(but not very old; it's almost the average age in this city), so it was not surprising to me. |
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Now the problem is how to set the cabinets on the wall properly, even though we have this crooked surface. |
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He struggled to find a better solution, and he explained to me that he would make the cabinets lower from the current position to avoid their doors scratching the ceiling when we open them. |
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As you imagine, it would be a big revision, so he just gave it up for today and went out. As you imagine, it would be a big revision You could say "gave up" but technically he decided to stop work for the day which is a more professional phrasing of it. |
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On the other side, there was another problem. On the other If you say "side" and you're referring to renovations it sounds like the other side of your kitchen. |
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I got an email from the contractor company. I got another email from the contractor company. |
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They said they will arrange for an electrician next week, and the plumber has no idea yet, so the other manager will call me back later. |
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WHAT? I thought: WHAT?! |
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Do you say that I have to stay without a kitchen over the weekend and for a week more? Do you |
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We've already spent a lot of money on taking out food! We've already spent a lot of money on tak |
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They confirmed the construction will be finished in a week. They had first confirmed the construction will be finished in a week. |
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And they changed their words.
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This is not the first time. |
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Originally, they would start my project at the end of November. |
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I gave them enough time to set the date for my unit, so I had already waited for 2 months by then. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But a week before the original date, when I checked the schedule, they just said the date had been delayed. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I was upset, but I didn't show my emotions to them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Just let they know my other appliances would deliver on the original date.
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I was so upset after I got the email today, so I sent an email with my concern and complaint(I got help from AI); |
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I am not asking you to rush the project, but we wish you would let us know a clear schedule. I am not asking you to rush the project, but we wish you would let us know a clear and definitive schedule. |
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I know he had to do it, but it was really noisy, and I was sorry for my neighbours.) I know he had to do it, but it was really noisy I know that he had to do it, but it was really noisy |
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Let's see how it goes... |
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I know he had to do it, but it was really noisy and sorry for my neighbours.) |
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Originally, they were supposed to start my project at the end of November. |
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I was so disappointed after I got the email today, so I sent an email with my concern and complaint(I got help from AI); I was so disappointed after I got the email today, so I sent an email with my concern and complaint |
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They said they will arrange for an electrician next week, and no idea about the plumber yet, so the other manager will call me back later. They said they will arrange for an electrician next week, but ha "but" is used for contrast. |
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As I had written before, this building is old(but not very old; it's almost the average age of the buildings in this city), so it was not surprising to me. As I had written before, this building is old I would separate the two thoughts here in writing. In a conversation these two topics would be overlapping like this. |
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