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Religion issue in India

When a society is rooted in this kind of intense religion, it will be destabilized by the corrosive influence of social stability and the profession of the justice system. Violence and time will not be a panacea with these issues. The death of President Gandhi rings a bell to every future Indian president; Don’t try to cross the bottom line of religious groups, especially Sikhs. The blood-drenched lesson had provided. The prospect of the Indian future is bleak without unification. Religions are still an out-size roadblock on the path.

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Religion issue in India

When a society is rooted in this kind of intense religion, it will be destabilized by the corrosive influence of social instability and the profession of the justice system.

Violence and time will not be a panacea withfor these issues.

The death of President Gandhi rings a bell to every future Indian president; Don’t try to cross the bottom line of religious groups, especially Sikhs.

The blood-drenched lesson hads been provided.

The prospect of the Indian futurea future for India is bleak without unification.

Religions are still an out-size major roadblock on the path.

Outsize is still correct, but it is uncommon. "Major" is more commonly used with the word "roadblock".

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Religion issue in India


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When a society is rooted in this kind of intense religion, it will be destabilized by the corrosive influence of social stability and the profession of the justice system.


When a society is rooted in this kind of intense religion, it will be destabilized by the corrosive influence of social instability and the profession of the justice system.

Violence and time will not be a panacea with these issues.


Violence and time will not be a panacea withfor these issues.

The death of President Gandhi rings a bell to every future Indian president; Don’t try to cross the bottom line of religious groups, especially Sikhs.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The blood-drenched lesson had provided.


The blood-drenched lesson hads been provided.

The prospect of the Indian future is bleak without unification.


The prospect of the Indian futurea future for India is bleak without unification.

Religions are still an out-size roadblock on the path.


Religions are still an out-size major roadblock on the path.

Outsize is still correct, but it is uncommon. "Major" is more commonly used with the word "roadblock".

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