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Kristina25

Oct. 2, 2020

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Relatives

Today my father and I went for a walk. During the walk we talked about our relatives. My paternal grandfather and grandmother had a lot of siblings and cousins. I have a lot of distant relatives who I don’t even know. I have never met them. Maybe I would go to another city and encounter one of my relatives without knowing it. My father told me that they all met together when my grandparents were alive, but now we have lost connection with some distant relatives. We meet with some of them, but there are other relatives, who I have never met in my life. It is sad, that we don’t meet anymore. Everyone has his or her own life and don’t care about the fact that he or she has distant relatives somewhere. I would like to meet them and get to know them. It would be amazing to meet all of them, but is unfortunately impossible. Fortunately there are some distant relatives who have a close relationship to us. We meet and spend time together or chat on social media. Even if I don’t know some of my relatives, it is amazing feeling when you have a lot of relatives.

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Relatives

Today my father and I went for a walk.

During the walk we talked about our relatives.

My paternal grandfather and grandmother had a lot of siblings and cousins.

I have a lot of distant relatives whom I don’t even know.

I have never met them.

We meet with some of them, but there are other relatives, whom I have never met in my life.

It is sad, that we don’t meet anymore.

It is uncommon to put a comma before "that" in English

I would like to meet them and get to know them.

It would be amazing to meet all of them, but it is unfortunately impossible.

Fortunately there are some distant relatives whoith whom we have a close relationship to us.

We meet and, spend time together or, and chat on social media.

Avoid a sentence with "and" and "or" in it. Try to make it all work with one "and" or one "or"

Even if I don’t know somemany of my relatives, it ifeels amazing feeling when youto have a lots of relatives.

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Kristina25

Oct. 4, 2020

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Thank you very much!

Relatives


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Today my father and I went for a walk.


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During the walk we talked about our relatives.


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My paternal grandfather and grandmother had a lot of siblings and cousins.


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I have a lot of distant relatives who I don’t even know.


I have a lot of distant relatives whom I don’t even know.

I have never met them.


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Maybe I would go to another city and encounter one of my relatives without knowing it.


My father told me that they all met together when my grandparents were alive, but now we have lost connection with some distant relatives.


We meet with some of them, but there are other relatives, who I have never met in my life.


We meet with some of them, but there are other relatives, whom I have never met in my life.

It is sad, that we don’t meet anymore.


It is sad, that we don’t meet anymore.

It is uncommon to put a comma before "that" in English

Everyone has his or her own life and don’t care about the fact that he or she has distant relatives somewhere.


I would like to meet them and get to know them.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It would be amazing to meet all of them, but is unfortunately impossible.


It would be amazing to meet all of them, but it is unfortunately impossible.

Fortunately there are some distant relatives who have a close relationship to us.


Fortunately there are some distant relatives whoith whom we have a close relationship to us.

We meet and spend time together or chat on social media.


We meet and, spend time together or, and chat on social media.

Avoid a sentence with "and" and "or" in it. Try to make it all work with one "and" or one "or"

Even if I don’t know some of my relatives, it is amazing feeling when you have a lot of relatives.


Even if I don’t know somemany of my relatives, it ifeels amazing feeling when youto have a lots of relatives.

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