Aug. 11, 2025
"I was in love with Bollywood series. It sets in the India. I liked scientific movies that depends on the imagination of life and the imagination of nature. Also, I liked truth stories that convey someone personal life into reality and how he was suffering or how he became a fomous character in all the whole of world.
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"I was in love withlove Bollywood series.
"I love Bollywood series.
For writing, "in love with" is for romantic connections.
ItThey are sets in the India.
They are set in India.
"Bollywood series" is plural.
Most countries do not need "the" in front of them.
I liked scientific movies that depends on the imagination ofexplore life and the imaginationbeauty of nature.
I like scientific movies that explore life and the beauty of nature.
"Depend" doesn't fit here - "explore" or "include" work better when talking about movies.
"Imagination of life" and "imagination of nature" isn't natural. See ideas above.
Also, I liked truth real stories that convey someone's personal life into reality and how the wasy are suffering or how they becaome athe most foamous character in all the whole ofthe world.
Also, I like real stories that convey someone's personal life and how they are suffering or how they become the most famous character in the world.
Use "they" (no gender) instead of "he" (male) if you're talking about someone generally.
Also, "in the whole world" can be used for superlatives. For example, "he was the tallest in the world".
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My favourite series |
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"I was in love with Bollywood series.
"I For writing, "in love with" is for romantic connections. |
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It sets in the India.
"Bollywood series" is plural. Most countries do not need "the" in front of them. |
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I liked scientific movies that depends on the imagination of life and the imagination of nature.
I like "Depend" doesn't fit here - "explore" or "include" work better when talking about movies. "Imagination of life" and "imagination of nature" isn't natural. See ideas above. |
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Also, I liked truth stories that convey someone personal life into reality and how he was suffering or how he became a fomous character in all the whole of world.
Also, I like Use "they" (no gender) instead of "he" (male) if you're talking about someone generally. Also, "in the whole world" can be used for superlatives. For example, "he was the tallest in the world". |
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