July 19, 2024
A beautiful woman once said that beauty was a burden. Of course, to keep beautiful all the time is a burden, but it's the one that many women wish they had.
An old flame is a burden, too. This is a burden that most women have. Why do we call them a burden? You have to look beautiful at all times, and be prepared to run into your old flame on the street one day.
A girl wrote to me, saying that she happened to be wearing an old dress and a pair of worn shoes that day, and her stockings were just torn. She had just run out of oil blotting paper in her purse, and her face was covered with oily sweat. Just then, all of a sudden, she brushed against her old flame. She tried to pretend that she didn't see him, but he saw her.
She did not love him any more, and since she did not love him, she could not bear him to see her in this terrible state. She kept blaming herself. When meeting old lover again, she should let him see her much more beautiful than before to make him miss her, she said.
Yes, she was right. Every woman wants the old flame to regret. Every woman imagines a moment when meeting the old flame again, he rekindles desire while looking at her in the eye, and then she loftily rejects him.
We have to keep beautiful in case of meeting our old flame. We must never allow ourselves to be ugly or fat. Even if we become old, we must not become older than him. You don't necessarily get to run into him twice. If you are not ready the first time, you may regret for the rest of your life. We have to keep beautiful to make him regret.
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A beautiful woman once said that beauty was a burden.
Of course, to keepstay beautiful all the time is a burden, but it's the one that many women wish they had.
An old flame is a burden, too.
This is a burden that most women have.
Why do we call them a burden?
You have to look beautiful at all times, and be prepared to run into your old flamein case you run into him on the street one day.
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She had just run out of oil blotting paper in her purse, and her face was covered with oily sweat.
Just then, all of a sudden, she brushed against her old flame.
She tried to pretend that she didn't see him, but he saw her.
She did not love him any more, and since she did not love him, she could not bear him to see her in this terrible state.
She kept blaming herself.
When meeting an old lover again, she should let him see her much more beautiful than before to make him miss her, she said.
Yes, she was right.
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We have to keepmaintain our beautifuly in case of meeting our old flame.
We must never allow ourselves to be ugly or fat.
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You don't necessarily get to run into him twice.
If you are not ready the first time, you may regret it for the rest of your life.
We have to keepmaintain our beautifuly to make him regret leaving us.
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Just a little fyi that "old flame" is not really a common expression in English. Great work!
Regret For The Rest Of Life
A beautiful woman once said that beauty was a burden.
Of course, to keepstay beautiful all the time is a burden, but it's the one that many women wish they had.
An old flame is a burden, too.
This is a burden that most women have.
Why do we call them a burden?
You have to look beautiful at all times, and be prepared to run into your old flame on the street one day.
A girl wrote to me, saying that she happened to be wearing an old dress and a pair of worn shoes that day, and her stockings were just torn.
She had just run out of oil blotting paper in her purse, and her face was covered with oily sweat.
Just then, all of a sudden, she brushed againstencountered her old flame.
She tried to pretend that she didn't see him, but he saw her.
She did not love him any more, and since she did not love him, she could not bear him to seeing her in this terrible state.
She kept blaming herself.
When meeting her old lover again, she should let him see her much more beautiful than before to make him miss her, she said.
Yes, she was right.
Every woman wants the old flame to regret.
Every woman imagines athe moment when meeting the old flame again, he rekindles desire while looking at her in the eye, and then she loftily rejects him.
We have to keepstay beautiful in case ofwe meeting our old flame.
We must never allow ourselves to be ugly or fat.
Even if we become old, we must not becomelook older than him.
You don't necessarily get to run into him twice.
If you are not ready the first time, you may regret it for the rest of your life.
We have to keepstay beautiful to make him regret.
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That certainly sounds like a curse.
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It sounds unnatural to me without “your” or “our.” Or you could say, “Regret Forever.”
A beautiful woman once said that beauty was a burden.
Of course, to keep yourself looking beautiful all the time is a burden, but it's the one that many women wish they had.
An old flame is a burden, too.
This is a burden that most women have.
Why do we call them a burden?
You have to look beautiful at all times, and be prepared to run into your old flame on the street one day.
A girl wrote to me, saying that she happened to be wearing an old dress and a pair of worn shoes that daye day she ran into an old flame, and her stockings werehad just been torn.
She had just run out of oil blotting paper in her purse, and her face was covered with oily sweat.
Just then, all of a sudden, she [brushed against] her old flame.
“Brushed against” means she physically touched him. Is this what you mean? Or maybe you mean she “ran into him” (she encountered him in public, but she didn’t actually touch him).
She tried to pretend that she didn't see him, but he saw her.
She did not love him any more, and since she did not love him, she could not bear for him to see her in this terrible state.
She kept [blaming] herself.
“Blaming herself” means she felt that she was responsible for something bad that happened. This choice of verb seems odd to me in this context.
When meeting an old lover again, she should let him see her looking much more beautiful than before to make him miss her, she said.
Yes, she was right.
Every woman wants their old flame to regret.
Every woman imagines a moment when, meeting the old flame again, he rekindles desire while looking at her in the eye, and then she loftily rejects him.
We have to keep ourselves looking beautiful in case ofwe meeting our / an old flame.
We must never allow ourselves to be ugly or fat.
Even if we become old, we must not become older looking than him.
You dWe won't necessarily get to run into him twice.
Use “we” for consistency with the other sentences.
If youwe are not ready the first time, youat that moment, may regret it for the rest of your life.
We have to keep ourselves looking beautiful to make him regret.
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That’s an interesting point of view.
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