July 22, 2025
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I still regret deciding to become a member of a class team for the sports festival because I couldn’t be of any use to my teammates until now. Also, there was a session to practice, but I only finished the discussion, so I spent money and time studying in vain. Today I was so tired, nevertheless, I studied a little.
私は少し体育祭の団員になったことを後悔しています。なぜなら何の役にも立っていないからです。今日も練習にために集まりがありましたが、話し合いだけで終わってしまい、お金と勉強するはずだった時間を無駄にしました。今日はいつもより少ない時間しか勉強していないのに疲れました。
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I still regret deciding to become a member of ajoining my class team for thea sports festival because I couldn’t be of any use to my teammates until now.
deciding to become a member -> joining: more concise
a member of a class team -> my class team (assuming this is the team for your class)
the sports festival -> a sports festival: "the" implies there's something particularly special about this sports festival, but there's no context to support that
Also, tThere was a session toeven a practice session, but I only finished the discussion, so I spent money and time studying in vain.
Also, there was a session to practice -> There was even a practice session: Assuming this sentence is explaining the previous, "also" should not be used. "Even" serves as a better word to emphasize the situation
session to practice -> practice session
Today I was so tired, nevertheless, Ibut I still studied a little.
nevertheless -> but
I studied a little -> I still studied a little: "still" emphasizes your conviction to still study.
Feedback
Great English! Just remember to not over use "of a" (X of a Y of a Z)
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I still regret deciding to become a member of a class team for the sports festival because. I couldn’t be of any useful to my teammates until now.
Also, there was a session to practice, but. Unfortunately, I only finished the discussion, so I spent money and timetime and money studying in vain.
It's more natural to say time and money.
Today, I was so tired, n. Nevertheless, I studied a little.
I broke up these sentences because you wrote a run-on sentence.
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I still regret deciding to become a member of a class team for the sports festival because I couldn’t be of any use to my teammates until now. I still regret deciding to become a member of a class team for the sports festival I still regret deciding to become a member -> joining: more concise a member of a class team -> my class team (assuming this is the team for your class) the sports festival -> a sports festival: "the" implies there's something particularly special about this sports festival, but there's no context to support that |
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Also, there was a session to practice, but I only finished the discussion, so I spent money and time studying in vain. Also, there was a session to practice It's more natural to say time and money.
Also, there was a session to practice -> There was even a practice session: Assuming this sentence is explaining the previous, "also" should not be used. "Even" serves as a better word to emphasize the situation session to practice -> practice session |
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Today I was so tired, nevertheless, I studied a little. Today, I was so tired I broke up these sentences because you wrote a run-on sentence. Today I was so tired, nevertheless -> but I studied a little -> I still studied a little: "still" emphasizes your conviction to still study. |
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