May 15, 2022
Regarding mask
In Japan, most people wear masks when out of the house. The government in Japan doesn't take this situation seriously in terms of wearing a mask, which can cause dehydration, lack of oxygen, and so on and so forth. As summer comes, I argue that we need to realize that we don't have to read the atmosphere anymore when it comes to COVID-19.
To consider the problem of face-mask, we have to weigh the pros and cons of wearing masks.
The pros are obvious that it will protect you from infection, and also protect people around you.
The cons are particularly serious in summer. Wearing a mask can easily cause dehydration and oxgenless. These were not the fatal problem in 2020, because no one can go outside. In 2022, there is no restrictions regarding transportation. But the prime minister in Japan, still now, strongly recommend wearing a mask when out of the house whereas some authority warned of referred riskiness of dehydration.
In conclusion, we should consider taking off masks during summer.
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The cons are particularly serious in summer.
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Regarding mask Regarding masks Masks as a general subject needs a plural |
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In Japan, most people wear masks when out of the house. In Japan, most people wear masks More natural |
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The government in Japan doesn't take this situation seriously in terms of wearing a mask, which can cause dehydration, lack of oxygen, and so on and so forth.
Maybe have a sentence before this expressing that mask wearing is a problem. |
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As summer comes, I argue that we need to realize that we don't have to read the atmosphere anymore when it comes to COVID-19. As summer |
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To consider the problem of face-mask, we have to weigh the pros and cons of wearing masks. To consider the problem of (wearing) face-masks, we have to weigh the pros and cons You don't need to repeat "wearing masks" at the end |
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The pros are obvious that it will protect you from infection, and also protect people around you. The pros are obvious |
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The cons are particularly serious in summer. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Wearing a mask can easily cause dehydration and oxgenless. Wearing a mask can easily cause dehydration and oxygen Oxygenless is an adjective and would not be used in this context |
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These were not the fatal problem in 2020, because no one can go outside. These were not "can" is present tense |
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In 2022, there is no restrictions regarding transportation. In 2022, there |
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But the prime minister in Japan, still now, strongly recommend wearing a mask when out of the house whereas some authority warned of referred riskiness of dehydration. But the |
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In conclusion, we should consider taking off masks during summer. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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